@hislittlerose
Active 9 years, 2 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Daeus replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
😂😂😂 Haha! I love how you used those parenthetical lines. I’ll have to try that myself sometime.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g That was 20,000 words
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths
Content. No language. No sex. Violence: a general description of Aztec sacrifices. Description is not graphic, but if just the idea of human sacrifices makes you sick, then you could have problems with it. One guy has a vision in which he is lacerating himself, though there is not a lot of detail in that part.Otherwise, this book…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g I don’t have a maximum deadline. A week is just my preferred deadline. Within two weeks is not unreasonable to me. However, if I happen to get a lot of volunteers, I would naturally prefer those who can get it done within a week.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@allison-grace What a neat idea!
Here are two quotes I love…


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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths I don’t have an exact deadline, but if anyone could do it in about a week, that would be optimal.
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Daeus started the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
Mornin Gents and Gentesses,
I wrote a short story recently that I’d like to find some beta readers for.
It’s a slice of life story as well as inspiration fiction in the broad sense of the term and kiiindaa romance, depending on how you look at it.
Its length is 8,900 words.
Let me know if you are interested. 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing Thanks, friend.
@salome01w4g You poor thing! I hate storms too. -
Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper Lovely. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 That’s what I’m confused about. This story is written in first person. You must be suggesting a different style within the boundaries of first person.
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Daeus replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Thanks 🙂
@dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 I’m not sure I know what you mean. How would writing it from his POV be different? I thought I would write it diary style because he will only get to re-enter into the story on certain days.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 8 years, 6 months ago
@daughteroftheking lol, I do that sometimes.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate This is loads of fun, by the way. And I also use PowerPoint.
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@daughteroftheking Thanks so much! 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper Ooooo…pretty! I like the candles and the coins. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g @allison-grace @xonos-darkgrate
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Daeus started the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
Dear KeePers,
Two days ago, I was inspired to write a short story that at the time seemed like a brilliant idea. I wanted to write the diary of a character from a novel who struggles with his identity and the problem of evil.
The problem was, as I wrote the first entry last night, I felt like what was coming out was practically worthless. Having…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@his-instrument Porgs are definitely Snoke’s secret minions… 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Outlines in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@allison-grace I follow the system taught by K.M.Wieland. It’s excellent as many others on here will testify. She has written several books on the subject and she has a series of articles on her blog covering the subject as well.
In her system, there are 18 major plot points. I like to have all of these down before I start writing. On top of…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon
UPDATE: thanks to those of you who were praying for my sister. Unfortunately, she went to the doctor yesterday and they said she has mono. Please pray that the rest of us don’t get it and she would have a fast recovery! Thanks again. - Load More
