@hislittlerose
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@emerald-flyer Awww…thanks for the feedback!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@emily Thanks for your comment! I know, it honestly makes me feel guilty too…
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
I saw this one at a hotel once and had to laugh…

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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@kballen Oh, that’s a good one!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper *raises right hand solemnly* I shall never offend a dragon again.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper Yeeeah, I was worried about that. Thanks for the feedback!
@kate-flournoy Awwwwww…thanks!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Ingridrd ooh, I’m getting strong velveteen rabbit/toy story vibes. 😀 I love the open end though; there’s still hope. 😉
And… believe it or not I really don’t have any criticism. It’s adorable. It made me feel guilty about my stuffed leopard that I haven’t talked to in ages. And it has that sweet, half-wistful tone of all stories told from the…[Read more] -
Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
Maybe I should tag some people…what an idea?!? *slaps face*
@emily @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @anyone -
Ingrid started the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
FEEDBACK WANTED
Hey, guys!
I wrote this very short story a while back and just looked at it again. Could you give me some constructive criticism? Pretty please?? Thanks!The day I arrive, Mother stuffs me in the dark closet to wait. She places me inside a cardboard box, filled with the other toys. There is a necklace, a set of paints, two…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper Come back! I didn’t mean it!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus I know, right?
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Daeus replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@ingridrd I want that on my wall!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago

No offense to @dragon-snapper. -
Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@emily-d The story of my life…lol
@dragon-snapper WHAAAAA…! So cool! -
Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Yeah. I knew it was in editing mode. I left it that way because sometimes people like to leave long comments at the end of a story. Suggesting mode is much better for editing in general though. You can switch it to suggesting mode whenever you like.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing Glad to be of service! All of those songs are great, btw.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Yes, I think I sent you an email, but if you didn’t get it, you can access it here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/16ycjr6zOnxjAtIpSkMQ6SDkHKlg5iX3oMfA9aHpUD7I/edit?usp=sharing
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel Heh; yeah, he’s been told, but reminders are always good. xD
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