Haley Long

@supermonkey42 I don’t think it would be too confusing as long as the MC doesn’t know what other characters are thinking because…that would be creepy.

@ethryndal Just thought I should add that How To Write A Sizzling Synopsis is a helpful book for writing a synopsis. You’ve probably heard me say that before, but what can I say.

@dragon-snapper Noice.  😉

@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Right here.

@lady-iliara Mmm… 😉

@supermonkey42 Thanks. I thought it had a cool classical ring to it. 😀

@ingridrd Oooh, ice cream. This is the best book launch ever. 🙂

@Ethryndal definitely better. I love it just how it is, but as Daeus mentioned, you might cut out the first bit about her step-sister without any damage and probably with benefits.

@ethryndal Like normal, I love the voice you use.

You might keep a long version like this for use on your blog, but if you’re going to use this on a sales page or book cover, yeah, it needs to be short.

You can probably make the point about her being heroine material shorter and cut out the part about her step-sister

@ethryndal  *wiggles eyebrows*  I wanna read it…although, I feel like I’ve just read the whole book.  😉  It is a tad too long, but that’s nothing a little editing can’t fix.  🙂

@sam-kowal I can see how it must be fun to have Stan as a dragon. 😉

@Ethryndal your sneaking suspicion is absolutely correct, but otherwise this is absolutely brilliant.

Seriously, and I almost forgave it for being too long because all of it was awesome. So yeah. It’s good. *vigorous nodding*

@daeus *highfive* And just for good measure……

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@sam-kowal

Um…sorry, Stan. You can’t eat him. 😛

Thanks everyone. 😀  I really enjoyed writing it.

@Daeus I already said this, but congratulations. 😉

Violators will be required to read The Count Of Monte Cristo.

Not watching something is not a crime. Only not eating ice cream.

Well.  I’m back.  *happy sigh*

@dragon-snapper @dekreel @inkling-for-christ @graciegirl and everyone else…

Happy *coughlatecough* Thanksgiving!!!

@ethryndal  Hear hear!