Haley Long

@ingridrd It sounds like a good story! The one thing I’d recommend is cutting. 😉

It doesn’t need to sound like this, but this is to get your gears turning and point out what I think isn’t necessary. Remember, the point of a synopsis is not to explain a story, it is to sell the story. Information is only important when it is necessary. The only…[Read more]

Thanks, @lady-iliara 😀

I actually need to skedaddle myself…farewell!

(And to answer your question @shannon, I am not a “coffee hater” but I don’t drink coffee.  However, I absolutely adore coffee ice cream…especially Haagen Dazs.

Okay, I’m outta here.  😉

@audrey-caylin  Thank you so much!   Those are some great ideas.

@supermonkey42 @shannon @emily @daughteroftheking

Here is the new and (hopefully) improved version.

Fifteen-year-old Jaclyn Fallows’ world has been turned upside down—again.  That is about the only part of her miserable life she can understand.  The rest of it?  Not so much.  Sh…[Read more]

@shannon Howdy, friend!  *shovels ice cream into mouth*  *sighs happily*

@winter-rose  Substitute is the name.  🙂  I actually just posted the synopsis here if you want to read it.  🙂

What about you?

@winter-rose  Sorry, didn’t see your post until now.  I’m writing my WIP…sort of.  😉  I’m doing other things in between spurts of inspiration.

@emily  Byee!

@supermonkey42  Thanks for the feedback.  Ugh.  That grammar gets me every time.  🙂  And yeah, I thought about what you said about the whole other world thing, but it doesn’t give too too much away so I’m gonna keep it.  Thanks again!  🙂

@winter-rose  Here I am!  😉

@winter-rose  Party-crashers are always welcome.

@emily  Yes, the one I wrote the synopsis for.  😉  My goal is to finish the first draft by Christmas.

@shannon  Gotcha.  Thank you muchly, ma’am.

@emily  Yeah, I wondered about those parts…thanks for the feedback!

@daughteroftheking  *strokes chin*  Perhaps, child, perhaps. 😉

*flies in on a gravity-defying contraption not nearly as cool as @daughteroftheking‘s*

@emily  I’m sort of working on my WIP while doing other things… 🙂

@dragon-snapper @emily @shannon @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @daeus @anyone

Hey, @rachelle! Haven’t seen you around in a long time.

@winter-rose Thanks. 😀

@supermonkey42

I hope you don’t mind free publicity

*crickets* *crickets* What kind of question is that? 😛

Seriously, thanks though. It means a lot to hear you liked the characters because I struggled through a big characterization problem shortly before I wrote this story.