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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 6 years, 9 months ago

@skredder Wowza! I love it.
Ingrid replied to the topic Hiya KeePers!! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago

@ashlyvye Hello, there! Have you heard of Pottermore?? It’s pretty neat…I’m a Hufflepuff, by the way. Anyway, welcome!
Daeus started the topic Informal Survey in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago

Hi friends,

I wanted to do an informal survey. How many of you want to impact the culture with your writing?

I’ve got a follow-up question, but I’ll wait till you answer this one. 😉

@dragon-snapper @seekjustice @catwing @dekreel @sam-kowal @that_writer_girl_99 @clairec @rochellaine @jenwriter17 @kaya-young
Daeus started the topic Quick Announcement in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago

Hi KeePers,

Most of your probably already know, but I just wanted to hare this for those of you who don’t.

I recently opened up part 2 of my Show Don’t Tell course for registration. You can check it out here.

And if you’ve been getting my emails about this and wouldn’t mind, I’d be interested to know what the barriers are for you. Not to sell…[Read more]
Josiah DeGraaf started the topic Beta Students Needed for Mini Course in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago

Hey folks,

Looking for 5 or so beta students for a new mini course I’m creating on suspense. The course looks at how successful professional authors create suspense and explains how to create a suspense on a story level, on a chapter level, and on a paragraph level to keep readers turning the pages of your book.

All the lessons are written up;…[Read more]
Ingrid and Jenna Terese are now friends 6 years, 9 months ago

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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 6 years, 9 months ago

@destiny I’m guessing you’re looking for fantasy-ish names, but here’s what I came up with…

1. Phoenix, Maddox, Zander

2. Kace, Deacon, Roland

3. Raven, Alessia, Marina

Hopefully these help!
Christianna Hellwig started the topic When it all seems rather unnerving… in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago

Greetings,

I don’t suppose I’ve ever introduced myself on this forum. I’m rather surprised at myself, actually. Quite frankly when you don’t know where to start on a writing forum and the link says “start here,” one can’t really be blamed for clicking it and proceeding to carry out its instructions. 😉 Okay….I’ve been keeping an eye on Kingdom…[Read more]
Ingrid and SeekJustice are now friends 6 years, 9 months ago

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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 6 years, 9 months ago

@dragon-snapper Cool collages! I love the color schemes. 😉
Daeus replied to the topic Hi, I'm Ari! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago

@ariella-newheart Wow, you’ve written a lot!
Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago

@anne-of-lothlorien Wow; that’s perfect.
Daeus replied to the topic Hi, I'm Ari! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago

@ariella-newheart Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!

Haha. We won’t attack you. We might have to send you on some secret missions though. 😉 Can’t pass up anybody with a shield and armor.

Mind if I ask what your WIP’s about?
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Your Online Notebook here in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago

@devastate-lasting super cool! Thanks for tagging me @Daeus.

The primary reason I use notebooks is so I can have something to jot notes in when I’m not at my computer, but this looks like an awesome program for organizing stuff, which I need lots of help with, 😛 so I’m going to check it out!
Daeus replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago

@dragon-snapper Cool. 😀
Daeus replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago

@dragon-snapper Oh, cool. Did you rewrite it?
Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago

@clairec Oh praise the Lord! So glad you all are safe. 🙂
Daeus replied to the topic The Synopsis Nook in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago

@sam-kowal Good revisions. (And good synopsis in general, btw. These things are hard.)

Possibly, these three revisions could help.

~~Feastings end~~ – feasting ends.

Only humans farm in the city of Kurr. Dwarfs would rather win glory in the exosuit arena. When food got low in the winter of 1276, the dwarves robbed us of our crops.

The dwarfs are…[Read more]
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Synopsis Nook in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago

@Sam-Kowal perfect. 😀
Daeus replied to the topic The Synopsis Nook in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago

@sam-kowal The idea is definitely intriguing.

As far as the synopsis goes, I agree with Kate that the voice is slightly inconsistent. My main advice though is cut anything you can. Like, “believe me, that tends to curb one’s appetite could be cut. There are a few words you cut elsewhere or phrases you could rephrase to sue less word.

Also, I…[Read more]
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