Hannah R.

@emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy @his-instrument What about this?

When fate seeks to destroy you, where can you turn?

Matthew has sworn to avenge a murder…

A story of action, adventure, and justice, written in a classical style.

@Daeus @His-Instrument me no likey. There’s no emotional hook.

@his-instrument I think attracting classical lovers is worth losing non classical lovers.

@his-instrument Thank. Those are great suggestions.

I do, though, need to have that one liner right at the beginning. The idea is that people have a three-second attention span. They won’t read the whole synopsis unless their attention is instantly piqued. Let me see if I can make the wording work.

A story of action, adventure, and justice,…[Read more]

Story 3 is live https://regeneratelifefarm.blogspot.com/2017/08/a-walk-with-master.html

I feel like this one is rougher and not as good as the first two… any thoughts??

@catwing @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon @his-instrument @daeus @ck4always @winter-rose

@His-instrument You, my friend, are a genius. Gosh. I love the one of Sadness.

https://regeneratelifefarm.blogspot.com/2017/08/a-child-victorious.html

@catwing @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon @his-instrument @daeus and anyone else who sees this 😀 I wrote this short story (my first actually!!!! 🙂 ) last night and would like any feed back your willing to give. Thanks! ~

And Now I will leave.
Bye everyone.
@salome01w4g
@his-instrument
@peoples-who-are-on-when-I’m-leaving
Good bye…

@his-instrument You will receive the email now… From Catwing about your book.

@his-instrument oh that is a really good idea!! Thanks!
@seekjustice , thank you!!

@his-instrument: I meant that as, “I felt like I was being super annoying to you and I’m proud of you for not getting upset at me”. I probably could have worded that better lol 😀

@his-instrument Asking my parents to share that… So you know why it’s taking a while

@his-instrument I would like to.

@seekjustice You writing? Cause me and @his-instrument are projecting!

@his-instrument Thank you. *grins*

@his-instrument Ohh… I want to read that! Nice pitch. Assassination, unexpected ruling of barbaric peoples, watching out for other peoples who want you dead, and being only seventeen.
*sits on edge of seat*