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Daeus replied to the topic Ghosts in Christian Literature in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument Great topic.
As far as ghosts in real life, here’s my opinion. So, what is a ghost? Well, a spirit of course. But the real question is whether it can be any spirit or if it has to be the spirit of a real person that has died, but now that dwells on earth in spiritual form. Of course, I believe in angels and demons that could…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Ghosts in Christian Literature in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument Great topic.
As far as ghosts in real life, here’s my opinion. So, what is a ghost? Well, a spirit of course. But the real question is whether it can be any spirit or if it has to be the spirit of a real person that has died, but now that dwells on earth in spiritual form. Of course, I believe in angels and demons that could…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument Well, it looks like I’m not going to be able to come after all. 🙁 I’d love to, but the two hour drive it too much.
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Daeus replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument Oh, it’s in Canton? For some reason I thought it was in Deleware. That would be a long drive for me. I might still be able to come, but put me on hold, because I’m not sure anymore.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@His-Instrument ummm… about thirty minutes… east? of Circleville. But our ‘travel-zone’ is usually limited to around an hour either way unless we’re going to do something really special all together, in which case we have to wait for a day with comparatively little cabin-related work, which are few and far between. Also we practically don’t…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument Ok, I think that should work.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@His-Instrument I appreciate your flexibility and efforts, but I’m afraid not. 🙁 See, I’m not driving yet, so one of my parents would have to take the time to drive me, which would take them away from the cabin business and leave the other half of the family to do all the cleaning work themselves, and while I’m sure we could manage if we had to,…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument No, that’s great actually. I really appreciate the fresh perspective. I’ll work on this a little bit more and then come back.
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Emma Flournoy posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago
@His-Instrument Have you finished reading Les Miserables yet?
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Snapper started the topic Catching Trout in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
This has nothing to do with catching trout. No, but it has to do with our hook. The first sentence, page, paragraph, chapter.
I’ve lost he fine art of coming up with a good hook, so, if you all have any tips, that would be most appreciated. In addition, if you have a book that has a great hook/starter sentence, then I would be glad to see those…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Catching Trout in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
This has nothing to do with catching trout. No, but it has to do with our hook. The first sentence, page, paragraph, chapter.
I’ve lost he fine art of coming up with a good hook, so, if you all have any tips, that would be most appreciated. In addition, if you have a book that has a great hook/starter sentence, then I would be glad to see those…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
This has nothing to do with catching trout. No, but it has to do with our hook. The first sentence, page, paragraph, chapter.
I’ve lost he fine art of coming up with a good hook, so, if you all have any tips, that would be most appreciated. In addition, if you have a book that has a great hook/starter sentence, then I would be glad to see those…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
Alright. Hopefully we’re good now. Can you find any way to improve it? Does it attract you? (why or why not?)
@leumeister @emma-flournoy @hope @kate-flournoy @perfectfifths @faithdk @jess @his-instrument @writefury @gretald @ingridrd @sarah-h @the-bean @mark-kamibaya @warrioroftherealm @hannah-c @ivy-rose @ethryndal @dragon-snapper @anne-swiftbla…[Read more]
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Daeus started the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
Alright, folks. So I need your sharpest analytical minds here. You see, I kinda need a finished synopsis today so I threw one together last night and would appreciate your best criticism on it. If you ever feel at any point in the synopsis that it has dipped in interest, that it sounds jerky, or that there could be better wording, please let me…[Read more]
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Daeus started the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
Alright, folks. So I need your sharpest analytical minds here. You see, I kinda need a finished synopsis today so I threw one together last night and would appreciate your best criticism on it. If you ever feel at any point in the synopsis that it has dipped in interest, that it sounds jerky, or that there could be better wording, please let me…[Read more]
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Daeus started the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
Alright, folks. So I need your sharpest analytical minds here. You see, I kinda need a finished synopsis today so I threw one together last night and would appreciate your best criticism on it. If you ever feel at any point in the synopsis that it has dipped in interest, that it sounds jerky, or that there could be better wording, please let me…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic A Fun Way to Get to Know Your Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument Excuse my ignorance 😉 But what is the difference between assertive and turbulent? 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@His-Instrument thanks for the invite, but I’m afraid I shall have to decline. 🙁 My family owns a cabin-rental business and we clean the cabins ourselves, so it’s kinda difficult to get away from, even one of us, even for a day. Thanks for inviting me though. Enjoy yourselves. 😉
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@His-Instrument Any schedule complications aside, I’ll tell you I won’t be coming. Not really being a writer, that wouldn’t be practical. It sounds like tons of fun though, so have tons of fun!
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Daeus replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument Ok, looks like I should be able to make it on the seventh. I’m also available the 21st and 28th and it might be possible I could make it on the 14th, though it would probably have to be in the evening in that case. I’d be willing to teach something too, though I don’t really know what I’d do it on.
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