HighScribe

@highscribeofaetherium

Lol, thanks! Is there anything I can do to help reassemble your brain?

@jonas

Yeah, since math is basically the language of our universe, and systems like set theory were originally intended to unify mathematics, then could there be a system of laws in reality that mimic that?

Russel’s paradox is basically what ruined…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, I usually get easily annoyed with depressed characters, but Kaladin somehow didn’t get on my nerves. So I would be agreeing with you strongly if it weren’t for that, funnily enough.

Oh yeah, I can see that working too. I’m not picky with the exact moment a character triumphs over something internal, just as long as I can tell what…[Read more]

Also, for everyone, how do you pronounce Adolin? I pronounce it with an ‘A’ sound as in ‘apple.’ My sister, @highscribeofaetherium , pronounced it with an ‘A’ sound as in the letter ‘A.’

@highscribeofaetherium

Love it! It’s a solid, straight forward system. I agree with Jonas’ assessment, though perhaps there are more creative ways of exploring that other than just making it a higher rank. Like what if they are the analogues of the previous two simply expressed by a different people, race, gender, ect. Or perhaps the Soulbinders…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium
You could just make Soulbinders and Endreavers literally just more powerful versions of Threadcastesr and Bondrenders. You could have an upgraded version of each one. Also, you put ‘Voidreaver’ at one point. I’m guessing that was a prototype name that you forgot to change?

@jonas

Just so I know, where would the best place on the forum be for that? I’m stilling getting used to everything.

Hmmm, there’s actually quite a few places. You can go through the General Writing Discussions page, and look through the most active forums, like the Place to Share… is one, but I would probably make my own on General Writing D…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas

I actually started a magic system forum a while back, but it fizzled out.

Personally, I’m very much a hard magic system kind of guy. As to the magic system of my and my sister’s universe, I’ve found it hard to properly approach in explanation, because there’s so many different layers to it, and when I try to explain…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium
@hybridlore

Alright. Here we go. I have three magic systems that I’ve designed, at varying levels of completion. None of them are part of a fleshed-out world yet. I don’t have time to write them all out afresh right now, so I’m going to copy my documents about them into here.

Crystal Binding
Resonance Crystals
Resonance…[Read more]

@jonas

Hi! Welcome to kingdom pen!!

I’m hybridlore, a Christian homeschooler, violinist, and science fiction/dystopian writer (most of the time).

Awesome that you’re @highscribeofaetherium‘s sister! My sister joined a while ago but she kind of disappeared from here, lol.

I’ve been writing for almost 5 years. Despite that, I haven’t ever compl…

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@highscribeofaetherium @jonas

Oh.. cool! 😄

@highscribeofaetherium

Wait, you can just make a new section??

@highscribeofaetherium
Sometime soon I’ll share something. How’s that? I have several orphaned magic systems that I could post. Where would I put that?

(P.S. If I’m going to do this, you should probably also share some of your stuff. From what I can see, you haven’t done that either.)

@highscribeofaetherium

That’s not how this works.

@highscribeofaetherium not at the moment no.

@grcr yes, she is my sister.

@highscribeofaetherium

Wait a minute… 🤔 You’re Jonas’s sister?

@highscribeofaetherium

Oh yeah, and I’ll tag some other people to say hi! @mineralizedwritings @kyronthearcanin @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @smiley @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @esther-c @everyone else

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper

Little scene I wrote with Tauren and Lesli!

“What’s wrong?”

Lesli sits down next to Tauren, brushing back her oily blond tangles. Tauren looks up, still wiping a tear from his eye.

“I uh—” He pauses, furrowing his eyebrows. “Miss my parents.” He trails off, embarrassed.

“…

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