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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @rae @vinagirl @trailblazer @grcr @esther-c @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @acancello @hybridlore @anyone-else
Okay, guys. I need serious help. My novel is kind of going nowhere…because I don’t know which way to start it!!!
I have two beginnings for my story. One jumps straight into…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Hmmm… that could work I guess. So, the characters that figure this out on their own are Vlydia, who’s a scientist, Nedan, who’s a miner, and Krenna, who’s a thief. Maybe Vlydia would be weird enough to try eating them as an experiment? But she’d have to see some evidence that they would do something. Maybe Nedan…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I mean, it they’re eating while doing something with these, I guess, but who would do that? XD
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
One of the tricky things for this story is how do I get people to eat these? Who’s going to just try to consume one of them and hope it does something? To make it worse, at least three characters are going to figure it out independently.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
The most important thing that I noticed that definitely should be addressed is: how do you stop people from creating infinite Resonance Crystal factories? Couldn’t someone generate a piece of crystal, break it off, and someone else consume it, or do they degenerate INSTANTLY (which would be a bit weird)?
You need the c…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I forgot about your previous post 🤦♀️
No problem!
I don’t remember exactly how it worked previously but I like how the updated version works.
The previous version was fairly similar. The new one is a bit more symmetrical. It has twice as many categories of powers (material, mental, etc.) but one less effect (I got rid of d…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom
I just made some significant changes to Crystal Binding. I used to have it organized like this: three types of powers: energetic, physical, and spiritual; and four effects: combination, separation, absorption/infusion, and distortion.
There are now six types of powers, but only three effects.
The types are…[Read more]
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 years, 4 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @rae @highscribeofaetherium @jonas | You know how RPs on here last for, like, forever? Ok, so what do you guys think about a RP that has a decided end? Like, the role-play starts in the beginning of the week and ends at the end of the week… or something like that… Just wondering what you all thought. 🙂
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Wait, is the Shadow participating in this attack?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Someone needs too keep an eye on those two…*looks suspiciously at Rae and Jonas*…things get crazy when they’re left unsupervised!!!
I read every page since page 11 because I had to know what the heck you guys were talking about lol
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RAE replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
look up
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RAE replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Nono, the dessert doesn’t have eyes, it’s just my eyes get really big and pleading like a little kid when I get one. XD
Imagine something like this: 🥺 but one a pale=skinned, blue-eyed light brown-haired teenager
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@rae is crafting logical statements that are completely logical, but completely wrong.
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RAE replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? XD
Oh! you ask! we are talking about valid syllogisms. time bubbles and how fettians are cool and how Cgecko is crazy!
Oh, yeah, I eat raspberry Bombs (a dessert) like a little kid. Eyes and all.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
The mechanics of Gunslinger’s time bubbles.
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Beth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Okay! I just hadn’t seen any of the other parts of the conversation, so I thought it was a bit random. Lol.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, but you haven’t introduced your newest character yet, so you could go.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @beth-torres
Who wants to go next?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium
Alright, I’m going to post an overview of each of the magic systems I’ve completed. I want anyone who wants to participate to point out any universe hacks included in these, including interactions between them, as they are in the same universe. (I don’t want to break the universe with these!) Also feel free…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Story Premise Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 4 months ago
A compliment if anything. I have complained about @highscribeofaetherium‘s excessively long tag in the past.
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A real-time week? That would be interesting, but I’m not sure how well it would work well. What might be better is to have some sort of in-universe end. For example, the character party RP theoretically will end eventually. We could have something like that but with a shorter goal. That could be fun, although I personally like RPs that last a l…[Read more]
Yeah, that’s what we were thinking.
I like longer RPs, too.
I think that would be fun.
@grcr interesting concept! I think I would join if we had one, but I probably wouldn’t start it.