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@ellette-giselle

Okay, I updated the chapter. Let’s see what you think now.

Chapter the 22nd – The Coward

@the_lost-journal

Rina —— (Elderstrand)

Rina furrowed her brow as the two began to bicker. Her sword slowly degraded into fragments, which fell to the ground.

“Seriously, what’s going on here?” she repeated. “And as a matter of fact, where is here?”

@loopylin @whalekeeper @hybridlore

Ellis —— (Edge of Deepwild)

They’re hopefully not robbers? Soulmight repeated. Wouldn’t she know?

Ellis, as usual ignored the sword. “Good,” Ellis said, waiting for the owners of the voices to appear. “So, am I.”

@ellette-giselle

Hmm… Stripe jumps on Tyn and is preoccupied with that fight? (Though it probably would not last longer than 2 seconds…) Rour attempts to debate with Stripe, saying his quaral is only with Alan and any who stand in the way (Which is why he arrested Martha)? He may be asking to leave peacefully with Alan and Tyn, promising to…[Read more]

@loopylin

I tried that, and for some reason there was an error and it won’t let me. I can try again tho.

Thanks for the help.

@linus-smallprint

yeah, I can close off the week gap. I might say “a day or two” or something like that. Would this be better.

I think you meant to say someone else’s voice.

Ah, yes, I do. thanks.

Poor Joseph. I would be a little curious to know what it was like for him when he lost his own father. Does he ever see his face in the n…

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@linus-smallprint

That’s fair. I feel the same way about ‘you do you’.

don’t even get me started.

With Alan down, he would probably try to step in and would not be willing in the least be to let Rour go. So Rour isn’t in a winning position yet. Do you have any ideas for this?

Hmm……

Let’s see.

Well, would Stripe care to protect Alan? I didn’…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

A week passed.

This feels a little odd right at the start of the book. I can see why you’re doing this, you’re trying to show us how over time he is adjusting, so I wouldn’t say it is a bad thing. It just feels unusual.

Joseph looked away. After a few minutes he heard Joseph’s voice in the kitchen. Sabina said something, and t…

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@ellette-giselle

YIKES! You changed your pic!

He he!

Anyhow, I don’t know why I even brought that up. I guess because it gives me recoil whenever I see it.

That’s fair. I feel the same way about ‘you do you’.

I’m trying to rework Chapter the 22nd like you suggested, but am a little stuck on what to do with Stripe. With Alan down, he would p…[Read more]

@loopylin

Do you know when the registration opens? I can’t seem to find anything besides dates for 2025.

@loopylin

btw, I told mom you had met Doug, and were from around there, and she was like “Oh my goodness! Did you tell were our family LOVES all the stuff down there!?”

We are looking into the Called Conference right now. Thank you for telling me about it, because I’ll barely squeak in before I’m too old!

this is pretty crazy to me. lol.

@loopylin

Have you guys tried homemade apple butter spread?

@loopylin

Apple noodles? Whaaaaaaat are those?

*internal scream*

This is flying fast. I thought I might’ve had time to RP, but I am going to a church retreat today and won’t be back until Sunday so… I will NOT have time I guess. When I get back I’ll try and read through the novel I’m expecting to come back to and see if I can jump in. 😂

I feel kinda bad for traumatizing this child.

@linus-smallprint

Alright, I will.

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Shorter section, but I want to make sure Joseph is making sense and his character is developing well before I post more.

A week passed.

For Joseph, it was a time of raw pain. He had always been shy and quiet, but now he seemed even more so. He seemed older than his years, and…

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@loopylin

What’s that signature? XD

@loopylin

Oh that sounds amazing!!! Oh I would love, love, love that! If I do go down there someday, would you be willing to meet me?

How old is the age cut-off?

Do you know the dates?

Does it cost?