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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days ago
Thank you. If you weren’t playing the advocate, would you take Ellette’s side?
I simply mean what I described. 👍 I’m not sure how it compares with the rest of your feedback discussions… I have very little context. XD
He he.
My mind reading powers are impeccable.
Thanks for the link by the way! I can’t guarantee I’ll read it…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days ago
I hope Eric gets captured though.
Isn’t that a little harsh? I mean, consider Martha. How do you think she would feel if her brother was captured in order to free her? The poor girl. She will be much happier if she is able to be with one of her family members again in hiding, even if it is his fault she was captured in the first place.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days ago
my apologies, if you make the earlier chapters available then I will read them 😋
Everything I’ve posted so far should be available in that last link I posted (I just did the link for the chapter a little differently when I was asking for ideas to end it). If you click on
Contents
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Question about religion in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days ago
I agree with what @raxforge said and would like to add to it.
Not only does God glorify himself through all that he does, he works all things to the good of those who love Him (Romans 8:28). So Satan also exists for our good.
Put it this way. Another question people ask is ‘Why does God allow sin to exist?’ or ‘Why did God create us…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 days ago
My brother is in Challenge 2, I am the frazzled senior trying to help him learn logic, debate, and Latin. 🙃
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 1 hour ago
Well, to be honest, I don’t know a lot of pree-teens who like to play dress-up and repeat whatever their sister tells them to say.
Good point. XD My siblings are a lot more willing to do stuff, but these are kids between the ages of 8 and 13. They still like to play “wolf fight” and “Indians.”
The funniest thing is, my most r…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 1 hour ago
Well, to be honest, I don’t know a lot of pree-teens who like to play dress-up and repeat whatever their sister tells them to say.
The funniest thing is, my most reluctant actor is actually perusing film now that he’s an adult!
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 1 hour ago
Sadly, my biggest two never got filmed because that was the year all my guy actors were done dressing up and repeating lines. lol.
They were too cool for school, huh? XD
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 1 hour ago
Do you guys want to try joining up with another small group?
Aw, Barnes is trying to be the comforting grandmother to everyone!
*Gasp* How dare you, she isn’t even forty yet! 😂 I get what you mean. Honestly she would be a pretty grumpy grandma. The grandma who complains about kids but gives them cookies all the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 3 hours ago
I don’t know who asked the original question. lol.
I have done several screenwrites. I used to film with my brothers and friends, and we even got one on disk. I still have the stories around her somewhere. Sadly, my biggest two never got filmed because that was the year all my guy actors were done dressing up and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 3 hours ago
Oh.
So I’m not the only one who does this.
Nice.
(Nope, you aren’t allowed to ask which ones they are!!)
lol. Just kidding
I don’t know anymore. I think you should leave it a little “darker”, and it’s good to have lose ends at the end of a story if you plan to go on. I just wasn’t feeling it at this point. I mean, like I…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 3 hours ago
@theducktator @linus-smallprint
I hope Eric gets captured though.
I felt the same way, except that I don’t know and like him enough to really care if he does.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 3 hours ago
See, these are the same lines I’m thinking along. I think I’m going to just make him older. The only thing that would hurt would be giving Y’all whiplash after I said he was sixteen. lol.
As for the children and wife thing, I know that Timothy wasn’t married at the time, and he was an elder. (Timothy is kind of my Joseph…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Question about religion in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 8 hours ago
Check this out.
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RAE replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 8 hours ago
Aw, Barnes is trying to be the comforting grandmother to everyone!
@theshadow @whaley
Tenz&Reid
Tenz peeked out from where he hid his face, studying the pictures. Slowly, he unfolded himself, tenderly reaching out to grasp the packet. He studied the pictures much longer this time, looking up every once in a while with his blue…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 14 hours ago
I am the asker, lol. I’m just gauging interest in using a screenwriting format. 😛
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
Oh, wait.
I’ve written a script for a small adaptation of Taming of the Shrew, does that count?
This question? I think it counts…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
I’m sorry, what question? I’m kind of behind on replies here on account of school.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
For fun or for school?
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