HighScribe

@rae

I… completely forgot I was ever in this RP 😂

Yeah, I think I’ll be dropping out.

But I’m still stalking 👀

@rae

Oh, I also read your scene for Chase’s book. Don’t really have any comments, but I like it. Nice title, too.

@rae

I read your scene, and overall, I think it’s really good. I’m not very good at critiquing, but I did want to mention just a couple things I noticed.

One, Mandin said it would take Nahim several minutes to defeat an opponent with a sword. Exchanges with swords actually usually last for a handful of seconds.

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@ellette-giselle

I think I’ve decided on a character but I’m still trying to write an adequate description for you. So I should be finished at some point today or maybe tomorrow.

Your drawing of Shadow’s character looks sooo good!

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, I love that chapter. Sef and Lilitu are adorable.

@theshadow

Ellette nailed it. I pretty much would have said the same thing (if I could articulate it that well, which I could not)

@loopylin

Ooh, I love those ones.

@loopylin

*agonizes over question*

Mmm… I think it’s Big Sky, MT for me, but there are so many great ones it’s really hard to pick. I’ve never heard one of their songs I didn’t love. How about yours?

@loopylin

I ADORE the Arcadian Wild, have you listened to their other songs?

@rae

I love it, it looks so good!

I’d like to hear it.

@rae

Uh…stars, that’s weirdly stated. Sorry, it basically means the triangle scale is at an angle.

Ah, ok.

@loopylin

I love that

@ellette-giselle

Oh, awesome! I would love to have a character drawn 🙂 It might take me a bit to decide which one, though.

@savannah_grace2009

I love it ❤️ that’s so kind of you (:

@savannah_grace2009

I really like the changes you’ve made to the prologue!

One typo I noticed, it should be Sevryn here:

“Where will we go?” Selena looked up at him with the brokenness of a small child, and the sight of his wife breaking broke something inside of him.

@savannah_grace2009

Aw, you’re welcome girl ❤️

I can’t believe how I’ve matured since then, in a little over six months. God has really been working in my life, both in my heart and in my writing!

That’s wonderful ☺️

(and you-and several others from KP-will forever be in the acknowledgment page of my novel…if you’re okay with that, that is XD)

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@rae

I actually do have a question. What does the last part of this mean? (I italicized the section in question)

On his left cheek is a singular reptilian scale, an upside down triangle with rounded corners and at an angle, in shape.