HannahN

@hybridlore

I’m actually hoping to one day revamp the story, change up a few things, and rewrite it. It has a lot of potential from what I’ve previously written, it just needs a little help. XD

@hybridlore

Thanks! Yeah, I know. So many new possibilities for the plot… 😈

😂😂

@grcr

Thank ya!

Oh no, you’re fine. I don’t know if there is much more to say. 😂

@smiley

Thanks for the input, I’m still trying to figure out how I’m going to introduce everyone without info dumping

It’s a struggle

Yesss, I understand. It’s so hardddd 😭 But you’ll get better at it the more you keep writing. Like, I read a ton of stuff about writing and I watch a lot of videos about it, but I don’t really get better unti…[Read more]

@walkbyfaith

Welcome to Kingdom Pen, Marie!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl! I’ve written fantasy and dystopian, but I have ideas for books in the genres of historical fiction and contemporary.

Time for questions!

1. Since you’re a semi-avid reader, 😉 , wha…[Read more]

Oh I love it!! Totally gonna be participating! This is gonna stretch me a bit, but it’ll be fun. 😏

@walkbyfaith

Hi! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I am homeschooled and in 10th grade. I love dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I am writing a dystopian and post-apocalyptic thriller novel now. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! Alright, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not alrea…[Read more]

@mcmuffin

Hi! Yay! Another gamer!! I loooove Halo (and portal, have you played portal?) Anyway,  I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I am homeschooled and in 10th grade. I love dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I am writing a dystopian and post-apocalyptic thriller novel now. I’m so glad…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I knowwww it was so sweet!! But it makes me sad that he left cause he could’ve supported her after endgame

I’ve heard a lot of people say that if Nat was alive than she wouldn’t have left Wanda alone cause Nat was always there for her fellow Avengers which I agree with

And I absolutely need to see that scene when your done with it

@freedomwriter76

Awww yess I would see Steve doing that too and that would probably be better

And yessss I love Steve and the twins

In civil war I love Clint and Steve, cause they really step in as the older brothers to Wanda after Pietro died (and oh my word now I’m crying😢)

Pietro!!!!!!!

@esther-c

Thanks for the input, I’m still trying to figure out how I’m going to introduce everyone without info dumping

It’s a struggle

I love the arcs, and I think now that I know that it makes Ami make more sense to me LOL

And again I love Ev haha and yeah I can see how pride might be one of his flaws

@freedomwriter76

Wanda!!! And Pietro, he’s trying so hard to be a good twin!!!

I love it, and Loki’s amazing!!

Also I had an idea for Pietro… and Wanda too (U always have ideas, but feel free to completely ignore this idea)

So uhhhhh you mentioned earlier that Pietro has stolen food and stuff, so what if Pietro stole like an item of a value…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I know right?! XD

yeah, I kind of figured he had some control but still like… I never thought of it that way! LOL

@hybridlore

Yeah it is, actually. 😂 I didn’t want to write about someone getting married so I chose adoption instead. XDD

Oh and for those of you wondering, Ami’s type 2.

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @hybridlore @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr @anyone-else

Sooo… I was working on some “character-building” the past day or so, and I’ve fixed my MCs’ character arcs/internal conflicts to tie into the theme more and so I can write them better/more accurately. (With a l…[Read more]

@smiley

Ack! Sorry I’m late, but I finally found time to read this. M’kay…

So the one big thing that I noticed was a lot of telling and info-dumping. I could handle the information, but it’s not always enjoyable to read a bunch of backstory. Stuff like that should be sprinkled throughout. Besides that, there were a few places where things…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Of course! (:

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @anyone

Ok, so I have bad writing, but my worst writing I deleted years ago!!! 😭 There was three chapters of a book I wrote on my parents computer when I was like 7, I tried to start a few books when I was 9/10/11, I had an almost completed book around 11, but I still have a book I…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I think so! You can go ahead and RP first if you want. 🙃