@hannah-olsen
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien *falls out of chair* *rolls on floor laughing* *dies* Agh, I love this to death! Simply splendid. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g Great! You can contact me here and then I’ll send you the doc.
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel Oh, yes. I’ve read the Wingfeather saga. 🙂 I guess it does look like a fang, only more foxish.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@graciegirl Yes. Just pointing out anything that could be improved.
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Gracie replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus depends on what kinda critique you’re looking for. Would it be basically the same stuff as we did with Fools in the Darkness?
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
Hi, @dekreel 😀
Is your profile picture from anything in particular? It reminds me of a Redwall character.
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Gracie replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel Welcome to the Kingdom!! Happy to have ya. 🙂 Do you usually write only poetry or do you have a bigger project in the works?
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Gracie replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien THIS IS AMAZING! 😂 Love it!!!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
Greetings back atcha, @Dekreel! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet. 😀 Cool! What poem was that?
What genre do you write? What’s your favorite book, if you can choose one? What kind of music do you like? -
Daeus replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@jess What Kate said. Basically, either the loss your character experiences needs to be necessary for them to become a better person or the ending is just plain tragic, but a side character learns something valuable from it and the readers are left with a lot of hope for that side character.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Jess lovely topic. I have a lot of thoughts on unhappy endings, but I haven’t got time to consolidate them all now, so I’ll just leave you with the biggest two.
The first is the concept of catharsis. The reader must be satisfied in some way or other. The reader must feel that something was gained; that the world is somehow better as they leave…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
😂😂😂 Haha! I love how you used those parenthetical lines. I’ll have to try that myself sometime.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g That was 20,000 words
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths
Content. No language. No sex. Violence: a general description of Aztec sacrifices. Description is not graphic, but if just the idea of human sacrifices makes you sick, then you could have problems with it. One guy has a vision in which he is lacerating himself, though there is not a lot of detail in that part.Otherwise, this book…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g I don’t have a maximum deadline. A week is just my preferred deadline. Within two weeks is not unreasonable to me. However, if I happen to get a lot of volunteers, I would naturally prefer those who can get it done within a week.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@allison-grace What a neat idea!
Here are two quotes I love…


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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths I don’t have an exact deadline, but if anyone could do it in about a week, that would be optimal.
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Daeus started the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
Mornin Gents and Gentesses,
I wrote a short story recently that I’d like to find some beta readers for.
It’s a slice of life story as well as inspiration fiction in the broad sense of the term and kiiindaa romance, depending on how you look at it.
Its length is 8,900 words.
Let me know if you are interested. 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing Thanks, friend.
@salome01w4g You poor thing! I hate storms too. -
Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper Lovely. 😉
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