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Kina Lamb started the topic Story Order in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
Hi y’all!
I’ve got a question for you:
In what order do you write your stories?
Figure out the plot then start writing it? Or is there another step?
As some of you may know, my WIP is a children’s book about my great-grandpa’s story in the Armenian genocide. Grandpa was just here so we sat down, pulled out the manuscripts great-grandpa left…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Lack of Plot in the forum Plotting 6 years, 12 months ago
@dragon-snapper Well, it isn’t easy. I try to write down story ideas whenever I get them so that when I’m done with one novel I can have a basic idea of what the next one’s going to be about.
But, obviously, you want a plot now. Well, I do have one suggestion. One of the best sources of inspiration for me is to read other novels. I don’t just…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@overcomer I think there are two reasons to know your target audience.
First, so you don’t write the wrong book. For instance, if I know I want to write for seminal-Christians aged 30-45 who are in the military, that will keep me from writing a children’s fairy tale. Knowing your target audience also helps you maintain a core unity between all…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@Dekreel @That_Writer_Girl_99 @Dragon-snapper @Ethryndal @Daeus @Audrey-caylin @Jane-maree @Shannon @Sam-Kowal wow, thanks so much guys, all of you. Just getting the general feedback and feeling out opinion about the existing title helped me get so much more perspective.
@Jane-Maree, believe it or not, I had actually already considered Destroyer,…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
Raspberry breath… Haha. 😛
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Daeus replied to the topic Help! I don't understand my characters! in the forum Characters 6 years, 12 months ago
@shannon I’ll probably be back, but for now, KP does have a really good character questionnaire. A lot of questionnaires are dumb, but this one digs into the core of what matters. Check it out in our resource library. It may or may not work for you, but I suspect it will spark at least some inspiration.
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Ingrid replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@dekreel Oooooo….ahhhhhh. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic Help! I don't understand my characters! in the forum Characters 6 years, 12 months ago
@shannon I don’t know about you, but when I first think of a character, I think of a face/name…and something about them that is weird. That really helps to get the creative juices flowing a little bit.
When you are actually writing characters, don’t. Make. Them. Perfect. Make them real. Make them relatable. Give them a problem and/or…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@kate-flournoy I agree that Victorious works. You can always use subtitles too if the title seems to plain to you.
However, it’s worth looking into new titles.
And now I’ve spent ten minutes trying to think of something and I’m coming up with nothing. 😛
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Ingrid replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@dekreel That’s great news! Congratulations! *shakes your hand vigorously*
(And I must echo @dragon-snapper‘s question because I am just as curious…don’t feel obligated to put me into the story but…maybe?)
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Ingrid replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@dragon-snapper You got mine. That one was kinda easy. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
I’ve got one.
“We need a plan of attack!”
“I have a plan: attack!”
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Kate Flournoy started the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
Hey, KeePers. I know I keep popping on and off very randomly, and I do hope sometime to be able to get back to a more regular presence, but for now this’ll have to do. 😛
I have a question for you guys. See, I have this book. I wrote it when I was fourteen and it’s due for a serious rewrite. That part is all under control.
But I’m having a bit…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@dekreel Thanks!
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
Jaclyn Fallows’ world has a history of turning upside down.
Like when she was suddenly able to create a small blue flame in the palm of her hand on her eighth birthday. Or when she started having the same dream about the sister who vanished without a trace two years ago.
But now, at fifteen, Jaclyn is in for the biggest change of her life. A m…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@daeus Thank you, thank you, thank you. Wow, that flows so much better…I’m gonna rewrite it, using your tips. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@ingridrd It sounds like a good story! The one thing I’d recommend is cutting. 😉
It doesn’t need to sound like this, but this is to get your gears turning and point out what I think isn’t necessary. Remember, the point of a synopsis is not to explain a story, it is to sell the story. Information is only important when it is necessary. The only…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
Thanks, @lady-iliara 😀
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
I actually need to skedaddle myself…farewell!
(And to answer your question @shannon, I am not a “coffee hater” but I don’t drink coffee. However, I absolutely adore coffee ice cream…especially Haagen Dazs.
Okay, I’m outta here. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
@audrey-caylin Thank you so much!  Those are some great ideas.
@supermonkey42 @shannon @emily @daughteroftheking
Here is the new and (hopefully) improved version.
Fifteen-year-old Jaclyn Fallows’ world has been turned upside down—again. That is about the only part of her miserable life she can understand. The rest of it? Not so much. Sh…[Read more]
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