Hannah Olsen

@his-instrument Another option is to add in an extra prologue or chapter in the beginning that has a very different tone just to give the reader something positive to latch onto.

@dekreel One thing I noticed is that most of your sentences are very similar in length. It would help to vary that up a bit. Have some run-on sentences and some normal and some very short.

@salome01w4g  Praise the Lord!  *bear hug*

@salome01w4g  I’m praying for you, friend.  Hang in there!

@dekreel  Thank youuuuu!!!!  I lover her, especially the eyes!!!!

@his-instrument I love the plot line.

I don’t know if I’ll be able to read the first chapters, but just some thoughts. I think you can set a tone in these first chapters that lets your reader know you’re not out to scare them. If you don’t get too graphic with the murder and torture scene and you give the reader one or two, morally good, hopeful…[Read more]

@Daeus sounds good to me. 😛 Honestly I haven’t studied it as much as I should have. But from what I know of Pinterest, that’s a very solid plan.

@lifeofkatie Okay, thanks. That helps. I think I’m going to give it a try. 😀

@introvert_girl That makes sense, though I think I’ll create all my own pins.

@dekreel Btw, if you want to learn more about this, K.M.Wieland has a whole book on it. 😉

@mariposa  *speechless*

@jenwriter17 It’s actually done already. 🙂 http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-golden-ziggurat/

@introvert_girl @kate-flournoy @seekjustice

Thanks for your replies!

So, I’ve read and listened to some stuff about Pinterest and I think if there is a social media site that would fit me, this would probably be it. I think I’ll probably give it a try, but before I commit to anything I like to have a strategy for how I’m going to use it.

I have…[Read more]

@introvert_girl Good question. I think in a short story, it isn’t necessary to fulfill your characters yearnings, though if you can, that would be great. I think you do need to show that the characters have made a significant step toward fulfilling their yearnings though.

Also, with villains and tragic characters, sometimes their yearnings should…[Read more]

@emily @seekjustice @dekreel @daughteroftheking @shannon

Thank you all so very much for praying!  Okay, here’s an update on my little cousin: she has been in the hospital all night.  The doctors think they know what’s wrong.  She was showing concussion symptoms and they think that when she bumped heads with her younger brother a little while ag…[Read more]

@perfectfifths

*hides because she hasn’t seen Wall-E*  Please don’t throw rotten tomatoes at me…

Okay, that without the exclamation point and dashes.

*facepalm*

<!–a href=”https://kateeverythingwriting.wordpress.com/”>kateeverythingwriting.wordpress.com</a–>

Ugh. Stop converting the html!

Like this only without the forward slashes.

//kateeverythingwriting.wordpress.com//

@kate-flournoy I have no idea what could be causing the weirdness in your link. My two thoughts are make sure your html looks like this:

kateeverythingwriting.wordpress.com

And if it already does, try using a bitly link and seeing if that changes anything.

Hm. It… might actually be the link in my forum signature acting up. It wouldn’t be the first time. @Daeus @Aratrea can I get your thoughts on this?