Hannah Olsen

@sarah-h I’m going to stop now. I wrote 447 words (I think.) 🙂 But I’ve run out of ideas. I was writing 100 words stories which were fun, though.

@spradlin‘s answer to everything, “Submit it” 🙂 *Grins*
I love writing poetry @overcomer, but I’m terrible at critiquing it. 🙁 Sorry.

I can got for an hour if you can. @sarah-h

I can got for an hour if you can?

@sarah-h Please tell me that you are still writing????????? Cause I can write too!!!

@hope Hmm, yes I should say it’s hard (knowing a thing or two about that). I think I’m starting to get the hang of it though. Let’s hope. Oh wait, I should say ‘let’s Hope’. Congratulations on your promotion to a verb.

I think I had some occasional problems with rough transitions before, but hopefully not anymore. If you see any though, please…[Read more]

I like the overall message of the poem, it’s really fun, but alas, I know nothing about poetry to be able to help edit this. Nice job though,

@overcomer
I love the topic for the poem! Okay, you said you wanted feedback…so here comes some feedback. 😛

‘Till I am overcome
By the multitude in my mind
I am restless from

I would rewrite the last line in this stanza. I know it’s hard (believe me, I know) when you’re trying to find rhymes, but I think a different rhyme with “overcome” w…[Read more]

Daeus concurs. Very nice start, but needs a lot of help with rhythm.

It’s a lovely poem, @Overcomer— great concept, nice dexterity with the words and such— I definitely think it has promise. The one thing I’m not getting though is a consistent sense of rhythm. I’ll be reading, and think I’ve got a rhythm, and then I keep reading and the very next sentence it’s disrupted. I get the impression there IS a rhythm…[Read more]

It’s a lovely poem, @Overcomer— great concept, nice dexterity with the words and such— I definitely think it has promise. The one thing I’m not getting though is a consistent sense of rhythm. I’ll be reading, and think I’ve got a rhythm, and then I keep reading and the very next sentence it’s disrupted. I get the impression there IS a rhythm…[Read more]

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@overcomer We’ve a topic for this, so head on over and join in. We are studying the first two chapters. 🙂

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@overcomer We’ve a topic for this, so on over and join in. We are studying the first two chapters. 🙂

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@overcomer We’ve a topic for this, so on over and join in. We are studying the first two chapters. 🙂

@overcomer Thanks. I think I’ve changed “shiny” but I’ll go and check. 🙂

@dragon-snapper WHAT!!!!!!???????????!!!!!!!!!!!! I didn’t write anything, but I didn’t throw a fit. You need to take a few of my B-calm tablets. (I’m sure I’ve mentioned them before) Oh, yes. When everyone was having untimely deaths. *shakes head sadly and starts to repair the damaged chairs and phones*

@daeus I shall have use that suggestion. Cause I got writer’s block too. *grunts in annoyance* But the trouble is I don’t have a pocket knife. *walks away trying to think of a new idea.*

@daeus I shall have to take up that suggestion. Cause I got writer’s block too. *grunts in annoyance* But the trouble is I don’t have a pocket knife. *walks away trying to think of a new idea.*

Howdy friends. I did some editing on five chapters, which isn’t actually that crazy because I was just correcting some things a beta reader pointed out, but I feel pretty good about it still.

@dragon-snapper What I tend to do with writer’s block is take the block outside with a pocket knife and carve the block into a dragon shape. Try it out.

@overcomer *checks internet space* Whew. Just barely enough. Squeeze on in.