Hannah Olsen

@sarah-h I have acted in three musicals. Well, two were pantomimes. Aladdin was my favourite but it wasn’t the usual story. We rewrite it so that we don’t need to get the rights.

Here you go… 🙂 This is what I’ve been working on. @jess

Glinting eyes, watching eyes,
Waiting for a maiden.
Glinting eyes, watching eyes,
To come into its haven.

Long white teeth, sharp white teeth,
Shining in the dark.
Long white teeth, sharp white teeth,
Scarier than a shark.

A puff of smoke, a curl of smoke,
Floating through the air.
A…[Read more]

Here you go… 🙂 This is what I’ve been working on.

Glinting eyes, watching eyes,
Waiting for a maiden.
Glinting eyes, watching eyes,
To come into its haven.

Long white teeth, sharp white teeth,
Shining in the dark.
Long white teeth, sharp white teeth,
Scarier than a shark.

A puff of smoke, a curl of smoke,
Floating through the air.
A puff of…[Read more]

@jess I got another verse written and my sister and I are plotting for a story idea that we are working on together. 🙂

@jess Yes, I can write for half an hour. Ready…set…write!!!
@dragon-snapper Glad you like it.

@jess Yes, I can write for half an hour. Ready…set…write!!!

@jess Let me see and I’ll get back to you. I might continue or well….I guess I might not. 🙂 I’ll let you know.
Btw @overcomer & @dragon-snapper I got four verses written for a poem about a dragon. (Here is one I wrote just for you @dragon-snapper)

With no place to sit, ‘cept on the floor.
Our hearing goes due to her roar.
The call log on t…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper @overcomer You guys did it AGAIN! Creepy!!!!

@dragon-snapper Thanks for the ideas. I’ll see what I can come up with. 🙂 (And I actually have done a poem in the shape of a Man on the cross. 🙂 )

@dragon-snapper I did that once and wrote a poem in the shape of a light bulb.

@dragon-snapper Yes, well, no. Well, ahem…ahem… I’d like to, but I’m unsure of what to write about. I am sitting with my laptop on my lap, so I’m thinking. Does that count? 😉

especially considering we’re in opposite sides of the world

Aren’t you both in America? @overcomer @dragon-snapper

@jess I just thought I’d hunt up a few names for you, as you seemed to be struggling. (that doesn’t mean you can’t use Tessa. I don’t mind. 🙂 )
Girls: Natalie, Rosa, Alyssa, Colleen, Kaylee or Kayla, Amber, Cassidy (Cass) Mya or Mia.
Boys: Jax, (I like that one) Tyler, Dylan, Kyle, Carlos, Cody or Coby, Derek, Xavier (pronounced with a Z at the…[Read more]

@clairec & @sarah-h Are either of you available for writing for a bit?

@sarah-h I don’t like the Phantom of the Opera, but there is one song in there, “Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again” which is nice by itself. I will be singing it at my singing teacher’s end of year concert. 🙂 It is very difficult. (But fun too) 🙂
@clairec *pats you on the shoulder* Theatre blues, terrible things. I’ve heard that song before. 🙂

@jess Dalton is a major character in book 3 of the knights of Arrethtrae. And then he is in book 4 too.
What time period is your story set in?

@hope Yeah, send it to me.

Hi, @Mark-Kamibaya, good to see you.

You’re right that overviews are essential, but I was arguing that they’re way too easy to overuse and that it’s best to always be critical of them.

To clear up what I was saying in my own novel, I was talking about any place in the novel where I overviewed events as if they happened in the past instead of…[Read more]

Hey, @Mark-Kamibaya welcome back!! It would be a poor welcome indeed if someone attacked you now… XD

I do see what you’re saying, and to some extent I agree. For the most part, however, we aren’t talking about scene-by-scene summaries. In @Daeus‘s case, it was several chapters summarizing a character’s childhood. (At least I assume that’s what…[Read more]

I’ll be sending them in once Mum has checked them so you’ll find out. Drummer Boy is one of them. @sarah-h