Hannah Olsen

@anne-of-lothlorien I do like it, though I think it could use some polishing. For one thing, some of the lines sound too every-day-speechy (e.g. “they don’t fear me”). One of the most important things in poetry is to say things in a way people don’t expect, especially by using metaphors.

One thing that really stuck out to me is that I’d like the…[Read more]

@sarah-h 🙁 Oh well. I’m sure we will make contact again. 🙂

@sarah-h *rushes back from having tea* I will definitely be praying for both your brothers.

@sarah-h I actually forgot about these lists. I’ll look at them tonight. (I was wondering what I’d be doing) Thanks for reminding me. Will you be around for writing in an hour and a half???

@sarah-h Yes, do. He’s back in??? Oh goody! 🙂 God is so faithful. You can tell your brother, that no enemy or problem is too big for God. And since he is fighting on the good side, God is right there beside him. 🙂

@sarah-h Yes, do. Praise the Lord that he’s back in. 🙂 God is so faithful. You can tell your brother, that no enemy or problem is too big for God. And since he is fighting on the good side, God is right there beside him. 🙂

@jess Awwww thanks. I think I need a break from my story anyway. *goes away eating icecream.* 🙂
Well, good luck. I’m sure you’ll do fine. 🙂

Hmm…I seem to have put temptation in peoples’ paths. Alright, you may have chips and chocolate even if you don’t write with me.
@jess Good luck with the studying. (You’ll need the chips to keep you going. Or do you like science?) 🙂

Hmm…I seem to have put temptation in peoples’ paths. Alright, you may have chips and chocolate even if you don’t write with me.
@jess Good luck with the studying. (You’ll need the chips to keep you going. Or do like science?) 🙂

@gretald Well, since you are getting over being sick you may have some. But not too much or you’ll make yourself sick again. *Reads post above again*

grabs all the chocolate

What about the other people who write with me, if anyone turns up????? *groans* Oh I’ll have to invest in some more.

@bluejay
Aww, man. I so wish I could, but I can’t right now. I have to go to bed early to get up early tomorrow, and I’m getting over being sick. 🙁 Hope you find some company, though! 🙂 Can I… *glances at chocolate*…y’know…have some…*inches toward chocolate*…chocolate? Even though I’m not writing with you? You’re so nice. *grabs…[Read more]

Sorry guys. I’m being terribly slack. So we should be on the next two chapters. So I need a suggestion.
Does we…
1. Just do two chapters a week and plow our way through it?
Or…
2.Do we have a week in between for reading the next two chapters?

People, it’s up to you. @graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapp…[Read more]

@daeus Yes, there will be other fairy tales. My MC has to find the story teller so that he (the MC) can get out of the story world. So he doesn’t just stay in the Beauty and the Beast story.
*Hands you a piece of chocolate for trying.* *looks around for someone who likes fairy tales* *munches on chocolate.*

@daeus Yes, there will be other fairy tales. My MC has to find the story teller so that he (the MC) can get out of the story world. So he doesn’t just stay in the Beauty and the Beast story.
*Hands you a piece of chocolate for trying.* *looks around for someone who like fairy tales* *munches on chocolate.*

@bluejay Oh, it sounded like you had chosen beauty and the beast. Are there going to be others too? Unfortunately, I can’t be much help even though I do really like chocolate. I’m simply not much of a fairy tale person.

@bluejay Ooo, I like the story idea! And like @christi-eaton said, it does remind me a bit of Inkheart. 🙂 You will let me read it when you’re finished, won’t you? 😉

@bluejay Ooo, I like the story idea! And like @christi-eaton says, it does remind me a bit of Inkheart. 🙂 You will let me read it when you’re finished, won’t you? 😉

@bluejay, interesting concept, it sort of reminds me of Inkheart and the TV show Once Upon a Time. I really like it, and I’m sure you’ll do a great job in writing this. Can’t wait to read it! 🙂 🙂 🙂