Hannah Olsen

@kate-flournoy Yeah, I guess he could have just guessed. He did say there was a curse though. I don’t really know myself. Anyway, I was thinking the same as you, I just wanted to get some second opinions on it.

@Daeus ooohhhh, this guy. Quite honestly he really didn’t bother me. He didn’t seem out of place in the historical fiction, which I think he would have if it had been a sorcerer in the common definition of the word. I just saw him as this really creepy guy who knows (or half guesses) things that are gonna happen (and really, did it take a genius…[Read more]

@gabriellemassman Yeah, I’d basically agree with you. I wouldn’t personally write it because I’m pretty sensitive to it, but I think it’s doable.

P.S. If you don’t want your muses, I’ll eat them. 🙂

@dragon-snapper Daeuses eat a lot.
Well, there were only a few corrections to make per chapter.

Wow, @dragon-snapper, you’re making me hungry! 😛

Ok, I fixed my mom’s corrections for three chapters. How’s your story coming? You back from exile yet?

@gabriellemassman Oops, sorry I didn’t clarify this is actually a historical fiction story. I called him a sorcerer because that was the best word that came to mind. He’s actually an apothecary though. Anyway, you made a good answer. This guy is occult, but what I meant is that there’s no scene with him doing any sort of occult practices. It’s…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper *runs in panting* I’m here! *flops down on computer and starts bashing at keys*

@emma-flournoy No, that guy’s very different.

@perfectfifths Sorry I forgot to get back to you. If you could create a google doc and share it with me, that would be the best. I don’t normally prefer that platform for editing books, but I would in this instance.

@dragon-snapper Ok, I’m gonna stop now. Got 690 this time.

@draggon-snapper Ok, I’m gonna stop now. Got 690 this time.

@kate-flournoy Nice.
@dragon-snapper Yeah, I’ll probably be here for another half an hour.