Hannah Olsen

@Abigail-Blomberg This is truly excellent. Pretty much everything I ever point out to people when I’m editing you did right. There were like two little things I thought maybe you could improve that I’ve now forgotten, but they weren’t a big deal.

@aratrea This might be a little too late, but I just though of one. The arrogant, rich city boy that is stuck by catastrophe and learns humility or something like that. Like Tony Stark, Steven Strange, Lightening McQueen, etc.

@perfectfifths Oh, it would take me a day normally, but I’ve got some other beta reading to do, so it might take a bit longer. I should have it done within a week though.

See, I have the opposite problem as many here. I drew this pic a little while ago and it is still bothering me because I have no clue who she is. So if any of you have a character she fits (or want to make one up) go ahead because I need a name for her. 😀 Also, I’m loving looking at everyone’s art.

@perfectfifths Btw, when’s the deadline? I want to make sure I get it back to you in time.

@delightinlife WIP stands for ‘work in progress.’

@Hope

Wait… where’d it go? Hm…

YIKES! IT’S HUGE! 😛

@Hope…

@graciegirl yep.

@Abigail-Blomberg Zikers…I think I’m crying! Wow, you succeeded with the emotions thing for sure. Good job! I don’t have anything new to really add as far as critique goes…
Oh, I noticed some of the sentences almost seemed to rhyme. It’s pretty neat and I’m just curious if was intentional? I think it adds a unique flow.5 Again, good work! 🙂

@ethryndal Sure. Here you go. https://kingdompen.org/panel-discussion/

@widdrim Oooh, seconding Daeus. That’s a really cool tag! 🙂 Welcome to the forum!!! You’re an INFJ? Neat. I’m obsessed with MBTI so I always want to know the types of everyone I meet! Thank you for including it in your introduction, it saves me the troubles of having to ask. 😉 I’m an INFP by the way. Have you ever heard of the Enneagram?

@widdrim Oooh, seconding Daeus. That’s a really cool tag! 🙂 Welcome to the forum!!! You’re an INFJ? Neat. I’m obsessed with MBTI so I always want to know the types of everyone I meet! Thank you for including it in your introduction, it saves me the troubles of having to ask. 😉 I’m an INFP by the way. Have you ever heard of Enneagram?

@widdrim Howdy!

Whew. You’ve been writing for forever. Do you have a favorite genre?

Btw, is Widdrim your real name? Anyway, I like it.

Hey @jason! You’re the one who wrote the recent poem, right?

@Jane-Maree welcome to KP! What do you like to write?

@hope As you can see, it has different types, so you get to chose whatever flavor you want.