Hannah Olsen

@dragon-snapper  Cool collages!  I love the color schemes.  😉

@ariella-newheart Wow, you’ve written a lot!

Just curious, has anyone here read any Wendell Berry or Marilynne Robinson?

@ariella-newheart Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!

Haha. We won’t attack you. We might have to send you on some secret missions though. 😉  Can’t pass up anybody with a shield and armor.

Mind if I ask what your WIP’s about?

@devastate-lasting super cool! Thanks for tagging me @Daeus.

The primary reason I use notebooks is so I can have something to jot notes in when I’m not at my computer, but this looks like an awesome program for organizing stuff, which I need lots of help with, 😛 so I’m going to check it out!

@dragon-snapper Cool. 😀

@dragon-snapper Oh, cool. Did you rewrite it?

@clairec  Oh praise the Lord!  So glad you all are safe.  🙂

Guys, I’m just popping in here to say really fast that I honestly love you all. Reading though this made me so happy. Even though I’m not on here much, I can say that I love the community I see and get to serve 🙂 You guys are the bomb.

@sam-kowal Good revisions. (And good synopsis in general, btw. These things are hard.)

Possibly, these three revisions could help.

Feastings end – feasting ends.

Only humans farm in the city of Kurr. Dwarfs would rather win glory in the exosuit arena. When food got low in the winter of 1276, the dwarves robbed us of our crops.

The dwarfs are…[Read more]

@Sam-Kowal perfect. 😀

@sam-kowal The idea is definitely intriguing.

As far as the synopsis goes, I agree with Kate that the voice is slightly inconsistent. My main advice though is cut anything you can. Like, “believe me, that tends to curb one’s appetite could be cut. There are a few words you cut elsewhere or phrases you could rephrase to sue less word.

Also, I…[Read more]

@Sam-Kowal ooh I really like it! Super cool concept. I think I’d definitely pick it up and read it.

On a more writerly note, the synopsis itself is well written, but it does seem a little choppy in places. It may simply be a case of too many fragments. Also, this is bugging me a little and it’s probably just me. But the voice is inconsistent……[Read more]

@jane-maree Ah, yes. Your screen must exceed the length of the image. I went ahead and tiled the parallax images.

@Daeus looks great. The only thing I noticed is a typo at the very end— in the money back section, you said ‘every’ when you meant ‘ever’. Other than that, it’s lovely. 🙂

@kate-flournoy

Possibly up your alley.

@jenwriter17  Ooooh…very nice!  I like the feel of the pictures and coloration.  🙂

@rochellaine  That’s sounds like a great story!

@joisebeth Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!

*hands you cloak and dagger* You are now an official KeePer.