@hannah-krynicki
Active 4 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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BlueJay replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Can I add a quote??? Let’s get this topic rolling again.
On that day, this selfish little boy became a Christian.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I’m writing if anyone is interested. @jess @perfectfifths @anyone else who is awake
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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Ah cause I was going to say, I couldn’t picture palm trees anywhere around here. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I know you’re from WA @perfectfifths. Are you in Albany yourself??? I would love to visit WA one day.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Thank you @emma-flournoy and @spradlin.
@perfectfifths I’m in the Victoria.
This is my kind of country. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@daeus Same here. The editing part that is. 😉 I’m still going. 🙂
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BlueJay posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago
People who have read my Golden Conch story. Hmm…let me see. @emma-flournoy, @daeus, @winter-rose, @corissa-maiden-of-praise, @overcomer, anyone else???
I have a problem! If Claudia is at risk when she walks in the streets (and I have made it so she is, she has to have bodyguards if she leaves the palace) then she would be just at much at risk at…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@daeus Still here. Tag me when you leave. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Merci pour le compliment
@the-bean Thank you for the compliment??? Am I right???
Is anyone still writing? Cause I am. @dragon-snapper, @daeus, @winter-rose, @kate-flournoy, @faithdk, @overcomer
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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@perfectfifths; @daeus; @winter-rose (And anyone else)
Thank you for praying. Just after I posted my request, I ended up chucking up. 🙁 It might have been because I was trying to take some medicine which wasn’t the nicest. After that was over, I sat outside and just rested. None of you Americans will probably understand this, but watching gum…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I’m sick. Can people please be praying for my recovery? And praying that I don’t vomit either. Thank you in advance. 🙂 🙂 🙂
@perfectfifths, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @daeus, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @anyone & @everyone
Haha Isn’t it terrible for the doctor to be sick??? 😛 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I’m sick. Can people please be praying for my recovery? And praying that I don’t vomit either. Thank you in advance. 🙂 🙂 🙂
@perfectfifths, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @daeus, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @anyone & @everyone -
Greta replied to the topic Book Spine Poetry in the forum Poetry 7 years, 11 months ago
@spradlin
Oh, that would be so neat! I would totally enter a Book Spine Poetry Contest thingy. 😛 😉 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Unrealistic Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@perfectfifths & @hannah-c Here you go. Just a little something that I was working on. 🙂
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BlueJay posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago
Okay peoples I’m STUCK!!!! I need a title for a story, but I don’t want to give too much away. So basically it’s based on Jane Austen’s novels and Charles is lord of Birchwood, a magnificent estate. His *cough* comes and well, kicks him out, so to speak.
My sister suggested the title “The Annoying Guest” which would work as a chapter title, but…[Read more]-
You could just call it “Lord of Birchwood.” I don’t know. Just a suggestion. Or you could call it *Cough*, since that seems to be a theme in your story. 😉
What is the genre?-
@bluejay Uh oh… even the KP doctor has a cough. D’you think it’s from all that smoke from my melting the chairs yesterday? 😛
Lords of the Will
Birchwood Problems
The Lord of Birchwood
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*hands you cough medicine* Sorry, that’s all I could come up with for now.-
@dragon-snapper Yes, that smoke was terrible. So please don’t do that again. Ooo cough medicine, thank you. You know, if you were nice tempered, I could take you on as a nurse. 😉
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@his-instrument Hehe. The genre…hard question since I’m not great with genres, but just think Pride and Prejudice. 🙂
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How about “The Will of Birchwood”?
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Or does that sound too much like a name???? :S
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The title “The Birchwood Will” might work, if you think that “The Will of Birchwood” doesn’t work. 🙂
Jackson E. Graham
http://jacksonegraham.wixsite.com/jackson-e-graham
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Hmm…a second on Lord of Birchwood.
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hmm, I’m not sure, but here are some questions that might help you choose.
What lesson does the character learn?
What’s one word that could sum up the story’s conflict?
Is there anything extremely unusual about your characters or the situations they find themselves in?
What are common words used in titles for the book’s genre? (romance, I assume.…[Read more]
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BlueJay posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago
@aratrea I hope you’ve seen Flywheel. Q: What kind of character is Vince? A henchman? Bad guy? Neutral? I can’t figure him out.
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Unfortunately, Flywheel is still sitting on my to-watch list… >.> =P
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@aratrea *gasp* Dooooommmmm…..
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I know. xP I really need to get around to watching it one of these days…
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You do. And when you’ve watched it, please tell me what Vince is. My sisters and I were talking about it last night and I can’t decide. 🙁 (And it’s driving me crazy)
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Haha; I will!
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Greta replied to the topic Book Spine Poetry in the forum Poetry 7 years, 11 months ago
@bluejay
Ohhh, those are really cool! I love the first one especially. 🙂 By the way, I love your new profile picture. Maybe it’s not so new, but I haven’t been on here in a while; I’m just so busy with school. I miss talking to all you KeePers, though. 😉 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Unrealistic Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@hannah-c I laughed when I read that and I’m still chuckling. I like that.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Free Verse Poems in the forum Poetry 7 years, 11 months ago
Okay. Awesome, many thumbs up and all that stuff. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Unrealistic Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
*nods* Very wise advice. @hannah-c
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My memory’s not perfect. Was the danger of her getting assassinated? If so, could the there just be guards at all the entrances to the ball to make sure no one is carrying weapons?
Ah @daeus That might work.
@Bluejay I was thinking something along those lines too…security guards of some sort in the ballroom.
Kinda hard to dance when you have bodyguards, I’m sure. 😛
@emma-flournoy Haha. Yep, that’s what I’ve gone with.