@hannah-krynicki
Active 6 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
Sounds like fun @lightningmouse. Do you want to try it for 15min with me? Maybe from 0:35 – 0:50?
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
Oops. Try you again. @cahndida-serkhaman
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
oops. Try you agian. @cahndida-serkhaman
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
Question: (@spradlin, @daeus, @cahndida serkhaman, @jadamae, @sarah-h)
If you were illustrating this for a child, how would you illustrate this verse.In a land long ago,
When men were all bad,
They stole and they murdered,
Which made the Lord sad.I obviously don’t want to scare them, with people killing people, but I don’t want to make the…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
@spradlin Come and check this poem out. What do you think?
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
*blanches* raspberry!?! How can you eat those? (I can’t eat blackberries either. I do like blueberries and strawberries though.)
Thank you. Now, an illustrator….. (or not! 😛 ) -
BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
I try to tag you and get it wrong! @daeus Try that instead. 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
OK. So I’ve been working hard on this poem. I have added some more stanzas in case it does become a book. So the targeted audience is young children. With that in mind what do you think?
I’ll tag you just so you do see it @deaus. 😀In a land long ago,
When men were all bad,
They stole and they murdered,
Which made the Lord sad.He said,…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
@anna-brie do you want to start with half an hour with me?
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Greta replied to the topic How to Create Good Conflict in the forum Plotting 10 years, 2 months ago
@kate-flournoy, Ah! Thank you for clearing that up! I was getting confused between personal character goals and the main story. So now that I think about it, in my WIP the main story goal is to defeat the bad guys, like you said, but the MC’s goal is to find love. The MC is an orphan, and she’s had a pretty bad life so far…so her goal is to…[Read more]
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Greta replied to the topic Battle Power in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 2 months ago
@hope, I’m not sure if this is what you’re thinking, but here’s an idea: when the battle between the MC and the villain is over and the villain’s men find out that their leader is dead, they could just run. That’s usually what happens at the end of battles…the men are really fighting for their leader, and when the leader’s gone, they’ve got no…[Read more]
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BlueJay changed their profile picture 10 years, 2 months ago
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BlueJay started the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
Right. Here is an idea that @daeus had. And I figured it deserves its own topic. Here is his idea:
Here’s an idea. Maybe those of us that have this problem (being distracted and not writing) could log in and holler out to see if anyone wants to write with them for a certain period of time. If anyone is available, then they could both do it t…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
@daeus HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! And HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA some more. Oh, Daeus you do make me laugh. Next week I’ll probably look different yet again. They do say “A change is as good as a holiday.” Now, I’ve been made to look like Peter Pan, Aladdin and a pirate (all boy roles I may point out!) But I have never been made to look…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
*looks up obnoxious in dictionary* Oh, so that’s what it means. I wouldn’t have put that to you.
Yes!!! I’m not the only one. Phew, now I don’t feel so bad. Deja vu! I’ve heard that call for Heeeeeeeellp!! so many times.
And how do we fix them: We find what the distraction is and get rid of it. The TV, internet, etc… (Boy that would be hard. 🙁 ) -
BlueJay changed their profile picture 10 years, 2 months ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
*pauses on the edge* “Breathe deep, Breathe deep.” JUMPS! *Right I’m in. Now let’s go see if I can write something. 😀
Thank you @kate-flournoy.
but the successful writers are the disciplined ones
There is a line in a movie (which @rolena-hatfield should know) which says “If honesty offends me, than I am in most need of it.” Don’t ever stop tells…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
@kate-flournoy. Help. Ok, so I’ve kinda overcome writer’s block. I can think of lots of good ideas, but I can’t get the words to flow. Any suggestions?
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
Come on @everyone. Don’t stop now. 😀
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