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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
It was really good! I liked the scene a lot. I would really like to see the previous scene where the fight/killing happened. It would help straighten out the dialogue. You see, Misty thinks Tenz is wrong, Tenz thinks he;’s right. Roan, (who I don’t think saw much) is loyally siding with his sister. However, we don’t have the actua…
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
That’s awesome, congrats!
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum Roleplays 2 years, 3 months ago
Silvanis
Silvanis looked again. “About the size of a rat from the planet Dary. Only one.”
At Sniper’s visible confusion, Fairy motioned with her hands. “About this high and this wide.”
Not gonna say anythin’ exact since you have an idea, just know Dary rats are HUGE.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
That reminds me, can you plz rp Sef soon?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
He’s in a random park rn with Sef somewhere in the city. If by the other two you mean Alpha and Violet, I guess so, maybe? Idk, @whalekeeper and I didn’t really set much of a place for them.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I have a way I can do a bully. She’s a shapeshifter, by the name of Narsa Jeptune. She’s actually an adult, but since she’s a shapeshifter, that doesn’t really matter. In Shyton, she’s a school teacher, but here we can say she was rejected for teaching, so came as a student named Judy Emerson instead. She’d join the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I have a Tenz scene!
@ellette-Giselle @grcr @keilah-h @loopylin @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @whoever
It’s not that great, so don’t go in expecting much
Tenz brought his knees up to his chest, resting his cheeks on his patella’s, and wrapping his arms around his legs. His large, childish eyes looked from Roan resting on t…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THOSE SCENES YOU SHARED!! Gahh! Especially the second one! Now I like Riker even more!! XD XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum Roleplays 2 years, 3 months ago
I propose they fight it, mainly cuz Silvanis would not run in a hundred years.
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum Roleplays 2 years, 3 months ago
Silvanis
“Trevor’s right. There’s nothing better than getting into a fight.”
Fairy elbowed him in the side but Silvanis didn’t even wince.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
I might enter a charrie later, but not now
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
*looks up what aesthetic means*
eh… not really. I could be using the word wrong, idk, cuz I guess I just meant it more in a… mmm… vibe sense? Ehhhhhhhhh…… just exclude that note. 😅
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
Yes! That makes much more sense. Ok, we’ll see how this turns out. I’m glad this girl has a skirt. As I mentioned before, I draw all my girls in skirts or dresses, so it’s a little hard not to make girl’s legs look like guy’s. haha. (I never wear anything but dresses or skirts which could help make that harder. lol)
haha lol!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
Maybe those helped? 🤔
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
If worse comes to worst, feel totally free to leave the tank just plain white… 😄😄
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
part II
And by “something kawaii”, I basically mean just something cute as a front design, like on a tee shirt… so something like this would work:
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
That is completely not me, so we’ll see how this goes. lol. 😀
lol same 😄
Oh, btw, do you have a picture of the tank-top. I’m not a fashion person so I have no idea what “something Kawaii” means. haha
lol I’ll have to use real pics….
The tank is very plain, and would look something like this:
part II of this message…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
Ugh, so I can’t post two pics in one post, eh?
Give me a minute and I’ll repost… in two separate messages… 😒
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
Alrighty, I’ll give a character of mine! 😄
Name: Fir Sayre
Age: Fifteen
Gender: Female
Clothing: She typically wears a stylish halter-top white tank top with something kawaii on the front, a pink hoodie wrapped around her waist, a knee length pink or pastel blue skirt, and some kind of white sneaker with white s…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Lir stretched out as far as the eye could see-the crown jewel of Andromeda, the pride of the Pythonos.
Punctuation thing: you want an em dash instead of a hyphen. The hyphen makes it look like “see-the” is one word. Usually, you can get an em dash by doing two dashes in a row: –. (On KP they don’t connect, but it still works.…[Read more]
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