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Chapter 14

A Mahnith’s Call

Sef lay awake, tossing and turning.

She was worried about her mahnith.

Any day now, Neveah could start labor, and in a matter of weeks, the Pythonos would be back.

How could they lose the baby?

They couldn’t.

Sef refused to give the baby up, especially to the Pythonos. She knew what the Pythonos would do to t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aaaaaaand I hate Hans already.

Shhhhhh, you can’t say that with RAE around! 🤫👀👀

@keilah-h

That’s good…

I just feel bad because I’m 14 and idk what’s wrong with me…like why am I thinking of all these dark things?!?

I know I always come across as more mature, most people think I’m at least 16…and I don’t mentally feel 14.

But still…no matter how I feel my age doesn’t change…

I’m having a mental crisis *sobbing*

@calyhuge

Jep (Narsa Jeptune as Judy Emerson)

Her black lips parted in a cruel, sadistic smile as she watched the boys fight. For humans they put on a good show. Though they still have much strength yet to gain. Walking up to the group, Jep put a hand on one hip. “Hello boys,” she said, with her smile still on her face. “Having a little fun…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Okay haha XD

Thanks <3

@savannah_grace2009

Chase

Chase nodded. It took him longer this time to make the image appear, but he eventually did. He pictured her smiling as she stroked the bird on her shoulder. “Is it p-pretty?” He asked. “D-did I mess up?”

@freed_and_redeemed

AH FREEDOM!! I’m so happy for you!! That’s so thrilling!! 😃😃💛💛

The boards look great—I love them!! You should make one for Fin next. 😄😄

@linus-smallprint

Okay great! If you go to my profile, I posted the link in my status update. Thank you so much!

@freed_and_redeemed

*even huge-r hug* Tysm 💗💗😭

Hahaha and I thought I had a lot of pins XD XD

@freed_and_redeemed

Thank youuuuu I’m so happy now!!!

hahaha yesssss as you should jk jk

WHAT THE HECK YOU HAVE 201 PINS FOR RIKER?!?! I DON’T EVEN HAVE THAT MANY FOR SEF OR LILITU

@freed_and_redeemed

Of course girl!!! I’m literally sooo proud of you and so lucky to know you (even if it’s just on KP, girl you’re amazing!!!)

And I love you’re aesthetics, very aesthetic-y <3  XD XD

@freed_and_redeemed

YESSS girl Pinterest and Canva are the BEST!

Hey, do you want to follow me on pinterest? You can’t search up my account cuz it’s private, but here’s the link to follow me if you want!!!!!!

https://pin.it/6IwrARipo

@linus-smallprint

Would you mind looking at my novel? You don’t have to if your busy, but the more people critiquing it, the more it motivates me to write!!

@freed_and_redeemed

FREEDOMMMM

I’m so happy for you, that’s so cool!!!!!!!!!

@linus-smallprint

I read up until Chapter the Fifth!!!

You are an amazing writer, it’s really good, I feel like I’m reading a published book!!!!

I’ll read Chapter the Sixth as soon as I can get to it.

No, I don’t think Alan seems inconsistent from what I’ve read so far!

@ellette-giselle

I try to overlook mistakes and I’ve gotten a lot better, believe it or not! But I still can’t stand looking at my draft and seeing so much cringy writing!
Even when I build something out of wood…I still want the wood to look perfect lol

I’m just a perfectionist I guess *shrugs*

Great!!!!!!

@rae

Sef

“That’s so cool,” she said. “Can you-can you do me?” she wanted to know.

@ellette-giselle

🫢

….

Gah… that’s not how it ends… right? RIGHT?! 😶😶

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I like how you wrote this part:

For some reason, though he knew what was going to happen, the whole situation didn’t seem real. In fact, after the initial horrified shock, Jonathan no longer felt the stabbing fear. He was numb physically and mentally. The more he t…

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@ellette-giselle

This is really good! I still don’t understand how you can write so fast…

Like I get that you have it all planned out…I have mine planned out too, exactly what I want to happen, but I still can’t write it that fast, I’m too much of a perfectionist and want everything to be exactly how I want XD

The only critique was that…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Chase

Chase shrugged, the picture swirling away into a mixture of blue and green. “I-I used to cr-create pictures for her. I j-just al-always c-could. Sh-she l-liked this one a l-lot.” His eyes formed into a bright sunset. “A-all I do is take a mem…memory and concentrate. Wh-what would you l-like to see?”