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Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
Tell me if Chapter 7 is missing. Cuz I edited it, and I thought it got deleted so i tried to repost it, but then it said I had already posted it.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Mmm, good idea. *thinks of all the annoying things Flaz might say while on the journey*
Oh my, Flaz is going to drive Ellis absolutely crazy!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Basically, there are nine characters so far (GRCR just listed them) who somehow ended up in this mysterious house that locked them inside and made them participate in a masquerade ball. Now the house has been mysteriously teleported to a different dimension, and they’re going to end up going on some sort of journey.
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Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
CHAPTER 8-AIQA
Nahim tossed his sword handle up in the air and grasped it with his left hand. He pitched it again, twirled it, gripped it, and held it with one finger (or at least tried to, his green sword was hefty). He played with the blue one in his right. Master Paul glanced at the movement in the co-pilot seat.“You seem to be somewhat o…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@all-the-peoples
Im considering joining here. Could someone tell me what’s going on 😅?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Editing a post causes it to get deleted in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 12 months ago
Yeah, it actually seems somewhat unpredictable. I’ve edited a few posts just now that didn’t get deleted, so I don’t know what’s up.
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Ruth replied to the topic Editing a post causes it to get deleted in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 12 months ago
Thanks!
I just literally figured that out about ten seconds ago and edited a post I was making and it deleted. Woops.
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Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
CHAPTER 7-THE INVESTIGATONS
The suns were bright and shining over Ladance as two Laxdains came walking together through the dusty streets. One was taller, dressed in red coarse, but durable, clothing with a powerful blaster strapped to his side, from his thigh to his knee. The other was shorter, but with tailored and comfortable clothes, and a…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest
CHAPTER 6-ON BOARD THE NIGHTMARE
Nahim was alone and unbothered for the first time in a while. He ran his right hand over his sling for his left arm but didn’t try to move the shoulder. He was different… -
Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest
Next chapter…I’m just going to post most of my chapters now since I plan to change some of them soo, but want some feedback.
CHAPTER 5-MASTER PAUL
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Do you still want some help with the UNIT’s name?
If you want to go with an acronym, I think the first step should be to brainstorm words starting with U, N, I, or T that relate to what the UNIT is. (I think using the word ‘terminal’ would be cool for the ‘T.’)
If you want to go with a non-acronym, then we need to think…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Yw! Haha don’t worry there’s really no ‘right’ and ‘wrong’ when it comes to mood boards. Everyone on KP has insanely different styles.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Thanks. I’ll try doing my first mood board. **Me getting a sinking feeling that I’m going to fail**
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Ruth started the topic Igua…the story that's going nowhere in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 12 months ago
Hi. I’m just going to tell you about the person who is now driving me insane instead of Jr. (if you don’t know what I’m talking about, look at my forum signature) his name is Ih-goo-uh. And his story needs some motivation to get up and get going.
Igua: Backstory
Igua was the son of a Realn Cloak in my fantasy world, Wond. At this time, the…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Okay, thanks! Those were the ones I could think of too, so I guess that just be it.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
(you’re welcome!! 😄)
Yeah, I was thinking it might be cool if they had to journey a bit before they got there. The house could tell them how to get there.
Mmm, good idea. *thinks of all the annoying things Flaz might say while on the journey*
My character isn’t at the house though, so everyone else can do whatever they want. Maybe my c…
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Personally, I use paint.net. It’s probably not the best, but it works.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Editing a post causes it to get deleted in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 12 months ago
I don’t think you can delete one. You can only edit a post for a few minutes after it’s posted. If someone posts after your post, you automatically can’t edit it.
The edit button is at the top right of the post, next to the ‘quote’ button.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
How do you guys make your mood boards? I understand what you put on them, but how do you put them together?
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