hanako

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah 😅 though to be fair, his planet is smaller than Earth, and thus has less gravity so people tend to be a bit taller. He’s still a couple inches taller than most people though.

I was just talking about what the general area looked like.

@GRCR

lol 😂

@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009

Yeah… I thought we were just gonna make it up as we went…

@highscribeofaetherium

Great!

Personality-wise, he’s the type of guy who’ll stand in the corner leaning against the wall with his arms crossed, silently judging everyone.

Ha! Sounds like me lol

@highscribeofaetherium

Zahlin is somewhere around 6’6”

Goodness, he’s tall!

Btw what’s this place like?

Do you mean the house itself or Lillen? If you mean the house, it’s basically a mansion with various unexplored rooms if you mean Lillen, the world that the house magically teleported to, I’m not sure. Its @rae ‘s world, so you’d have to ask h…[Read more]

Btw what’s this place like?

@imtoolazytotaganyonelol

K, here’s my character (s, I guess). This is pretty rough, but it should get the idea across. They’re also pretty underdeveloped but that’s why I chose them.

Zahlin (the ‘H’ is silent):

Zahlin is somewhere around 6’6”. He has shaggy black hair streaked with grey. Not sure about his eyes yet. Pale skin. His hands are cov…[Read more]

@jonas

Okay!

@savannah_grace2009

So I guess that chapter by itself doesn’t seem necessary, but the Pythonos is going to kidnap her and Jyron and use them as hostages so that their father will provide military forces and supplies to start a war against the Paynes.

Okay, it’s definitely essential then.

@jonas

So I guess that chapter by itself doesn’t seem necessary, but the Pythonos is going to kidnap her and Jyron and use them as hostages so that their father will provide military forces and supplies to start a war against the Paynes.

Does that make sense?

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, yeah. That definitely works.

@jonas

 I did mention a possible explanation for why the prisoners might call it that, although I’m not sure it would account for why the Pythonos do.

There are other “units”, this is just the main one and the most important one.

Okay though, that would be hilarious if that actually happened, if Marcurious asked Jraldath why it’s called the UN…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

The chapter looks good 👍🏻

The only thing to think about is whether this is essential, considering Liv’s position as a less important than the others. I’m not saying it is or isn’t, I don’t think I know enough to judge, but just something to think about. You probably want to keep Liv’s story as concise as possible, so anythi…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

You keep asking, though, why it is the “unit” and how is it the definition of the word. I tend to be lazy and not overthink it. Correct me if I’m wrong but does it really matter why it’s called that? If so, why does it matter?

If you use an already existing word, people will naturally expect that there is some sort of explana…[Read more]

I know it’s a little rough, but it’s my first draft so definitely far from perfect, lol

@jonas

Here’s a little snippet from the next chapter from Liv’s POV:

Chapter 17

“I’ll race you to the brook,” Jyran smiled crookedly over his shoulder, barely giving Livia a chance to agree before giving his mount Irwin a gentle squeeze with his calves and galloping away in a cloud of dirt.

Liv tucked a strand of her azure hair behind her ear,…

[Read more]

@jonas

Okay, I’ll work on the idea about the horses.

EXU…I kind of like that. We’ll see though. Imagine if I did do EU…and someone from Europe read that, they’d be like “Europe’s not like that at all!” jk.

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t think it’s too common to have talking horses. Highly intelligent horses are pretty common, but they don’t always talk. I think the idea could work, but I think it would be a bit odd to have one variety of horse for each race. Maybe just one type?

EU does stand for European Union in real life, so that might be weird…[Read more]

@jonas

I might just keep it the UNIT, then.

You keep asking, though, why it is the “unit” and how is it the definition of the word. I tend to be lazy and not overthink it. Correct me if I’m wrong but does it really matter why it’s called that? If so, why does it matter? (sorry if I sound like a brat rn, I’m just kind of confused.) It is just a…[Read more]

@jonas

Sorry. Brain fart. I meant EU. (Why did I put P?) But then that reminds me of the abbreviation for Europe. So idk.

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

So in my WIP, Liv has a horse named Xandro. I was thinking that all the races have horses that are intelligent and match the “color scheme” and have the same powers. For example: Liv in an Aquino, she has blue hair, eyes, skin, clothes, and has the power to manipulate water. Xandro has a blue coat, eyes, hooves, mane and…[Read more]