@hanako
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I mean, she could’ve had a crush before her family moved… but I didn’t think that far back lol. It doesn’t really matter for the sake of the story though. I’ll try to update this again soon.
Well, it’s the first in the story XD
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grcr replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
There’s no one to help you! At least, not anyone those two would be likely listen to. Lane is the only one who isn’t doing anything.
Lane was just sitting quietly at the table. Since he isn’t really doing anything, I can make him go to Leon and Zahlin if you guys want.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
SOMEONE HELP US THESE GUYS ARE QUITE POSSIBLY GOING TO MURDER EACH OTHER!” The Sword screamed.
Zahlin froze.
You’re welcome. Sword said proudly.
That’s hilarious
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Well, that’s one way to solve your problems! Not what I was expecting!
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grcr replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh! A daily recap is a good idea! (I don’t know If my message had sent several seconds ago… so sorry if this is doubled…)
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Hmm… we must get extreme then.
The Sword
”SOMEONE HELP US THESE GUYS ARE QUITE POSSIBLY GOING TO MURDER EACH OTHER!” The Sword screamed.
Zahlin froze.
You’re welcome. Sword said proudly.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Btw, I don’t know if you know much about Zahlin yet, but yeah, his sword talks. The italics mean it was talking directly into Zahlin’s head, so Leon wouldn’t have heard that. Just in case you aren’t familiar with this already.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
There’s no one to help you! At least, not anyone those two would be likely listen to. Lane is the only one who isn’t doing anything.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Why, Leon, why? Why did you have to say that? 😅
Zahlin
“You’re bold.” The man said, “How can we be sure there are even any dragons to fight?” The man stepped closer. “Say, how old are you and what’s your name? Why you look double what I am.”
Oh dear. Said the Sword, And I thought this was going quite well. Please don’t murder him…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Poor Kari. Hopefully Zahlin doesn’t decide to interrogate her next!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c @rar @highscribeofaetherium @hanako @freedomwriter76 (Sorry to tag you twice, everyone. I had to fix an error and this format is better I think)
Recap
Ottoline: Being approached by Nahim. Hugo is somewhere nearby.
Lane: Unknown
Flaz: Annoying Ellis as he tries to…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@everyone
Oops! One mistake on the recap: Amir is with Hedeih and Kari.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
K thx. And yes, a daily recap will likely be very helpful 😅
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Looks: Light brown hair in loose curls, brown eyes, slim build and bold eyebrows. He wears very medieval village clothing. Height: 5′ 6″ age: 16, carrying sword in belt sheath
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I think he has a sword. I’ll try to find where he was introduced.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Attention all!
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c @rae @highscribeofaetherium @hanako @freedomwriter76 (I think I got everyone)
Due to the large amount of people RPing, it seems that people keep getting confused with what’s happening, so to fix that, I’m going to start doing a daily recap. This won…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Is Leon armed? And how old is he? I can’t find where you introduced him.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
Ellis ignored the weird guy and turned back to Kaine. “What I wanted to know was, how well can you fight?”
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@grcr, once again, Flaz can interrupt if you want. Flaz has successfully made Ellis speechless, lol. For every other character he’s talked to, Ellis always had something to say, but not with Flaz XD.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
“Well, what I wanted to ask you was how well you use that bow of yours? And if you are willing to work as a team. ‘Divided we stand, divided we fall, but if united we stand, we will not fall.’”
Very direct XD
Probably the best way to approach this topic, actually.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Pronunciation: Otto-line (Otto as in the name otto plus line)
That’s funny, I’ve been pronouncing it that way, but I never thought that it might be pronounced differently. The way it’s spelled it could easily be pronounced “ot-ol-in-ay” or something like that although that would be pretty silly!
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