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(How do we know when we have enough letters?)

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@thearcaneaxiom

I mean, a google doc would be neater, because we could sort everything into sections and state things more concisely, but I’m good with whatever.

@jonas

Yeah, I’m working on it.

@highscribeofaetherium

So are you going to write an RP with Zahlin talking to them, or was I mistaken to think that was going to happen?

@jonas

Oh, oops.

You missed this part

imprinting the memories of one individual on a photograph, onto another individual by looking at said photograph. Some Hypnotographers have even killed people by glaring at a photo of them and simultaneously…

Everything we know about hypnotography so far:
Introducing hypnotography, a magic system that anyone can use to hypnotize a human being and potentially capture their memories on photographs. The only drawback is it leaves painful headaches for the “victim” which may erase the memories altogether until the victim drinks a milkshake containing ext…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Maybe we should create a google doc or something so that we can record this information concisely. Otherwise we might end up sifting through pages to find something.

@thearcaneaxiom

Sure!

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes! Maybe put a heading in bold to indicate the topic and then if you’re following up on what someone else said, quote them?

…killed people by glaring at a photo of them and simultaneously…

@esther-c

She didn’t yet. She just planned to.

@savannah_grace2009

The reason I had her be abused is to  show that God (or in this case, the Great One) can heal broken hearts and he has perfect love. This can still happen if her main conflict is missing her father. This would present the message that a father figure is important for every child to have. That way she still has a little…

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@jonas

Did your mentor give you any suggestions? Because I think that it’s not good to only give negative feedback without any positive feedback or suggestions on how to fix the negative feedback.

That’s what gets a little frustrating with him. He finds flaws, and he tells me what they are but never tells me exactly how to fix them. If he doe…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @esther-c
Ellis

Ellis sat down wearily, glad that things had calmed down…finally.

”How did we get dragged into this?” he sighed quietly, so that only Conviction could hear, “I just want to get back. They need us.”

The Queen said she’d said us back at the exact time we left, said the sword, your friends will be fine. And,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I pretty much agree with what Jonas said. And I would also say to just take a break. Do something else, get your mind off it, and don’t let it drag you down. And pray about it. That’s the best thing you can possibly do right now.

..inhale really hard. The magic is also capable of…

(@thearcaneaxiom I saved us, you’re welcome!)

@savannah_grace2009

XD

@savannah_grace2009

Hmmm… I see what you mean. If I’m understanding correctly, the issue is that all of the characters are in super hard and depressing situations? My immediate thought is to just have at least one character who isn’t. Now that I think about it, most stories I’ve read don’t have more than one character like that, because is is <…[Read more]