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@rae @esther-c @trailblazer

Okay. Someone else can start, cause I don’t know what to do. I think the last one was a Kari POV. If you need to reference it, you should be able to find it in the doc.

@esther-c

Sounds good!

Livia

“Sure!” Liv said, both to going to the mall and staying with Callista. “I guess I do need to find some new clothes, especially a dress for the dance. I didn’t bring a dress, only breeches,” she laughed and tickled Xandro’s chin.

@jomnas

Heroes, here we come!

@jonas

I’m good with getting back to the heroes now.

@everyone

This seems like a good place to end the villains’ scene, unless anyone wants to do anything still.

@rae @trailblazer @esther-c

Do you want to go back to Nora, Kari, Kate, and Amir planning the scouting missions?

@rae

Nice! I really like it!

I agree with what everyone else has said, especially that there were a lot of run-on sentences. But overall, it’s really great so far!

@rae

Those are both amazing! (Sorry I missed the one you posted a few days ago, I don’t have notifics activated so I’m likely to miss tags unless it’s something I check on often)

I love this line:

But the hero is the one who bleeds,

Red drops that fall like planter’s seeds.

Great job with both of them!

Dlek

She won’t get far.

Dlek set about making it look like a fight had taken place. He used his sword to create marks on the walls. Then he shifted some rubble, pretending to get up and groaned. “She got away!” he called through the wall. He heard Zash start raving, but he couldn’t make out any words through the wall.

@hybridlore

Well it’s kind of a long story buuuut…….

While Sef is being abused, Lilitu gets visions of it, but he doesn’t know it’s her. Then he gets these urges from God to help her somehow, but he ignores them because he thinks it’s all in his head.

And then he finds out about her being abused and he feels really guilty because he feels…[Read more]

Vethe

“Fine!” Vethe snapped, “Go ahead! Survive!” She turned and dashed away again. “Goodbye, Dlek son of Razath.” She shouted over her shoulder as the turned the corner. A window sat in the wall at the end of the hallway. Perfect. She thought. She cast a glance back before launching herself out into thin air.

***

Dramatic exit 😎

Dlek

Dlek’s eyes flashed. “I’m staying because I’m not a hero and I’m not stupid! I’m a survivor.” He yanked his arm away again. “Go on. I bought you some time. You probably won’t get away, but I don’t want to see my efforts wasted.”

Vethe

Vethe snorted. “Yeah, right.” She said, “You stay here and you’re dead. I can’t tell if you’re trying to be heroic or if you’re just stupid.” She pulled on his arm. “Come on.”

Dlek

The ceiling collapsed behind them, blocking off Zash and Marcurious on the other side. Dlek yanked his arm free from Vethe’s grip. “Go.”

@rae

😭😭😭😭😭😫😫😫😫😖😖😖😭😭😖

It gets worse…

Jr holds all his grief up inside, thinking to grieve openly is a weakness. Eventually it turns into anger. He follows the road that his adoptive father followed, with his own twist. He vents all his anger towards his real father, Grathmere, and continues the greatest hatred for Grathmere there ever was.

Vethe

Dlek was either the most hopeless fighter in the history of hopeless fighters, or he had some elaborate plan at work. He seemed to be intentionally cutting the wall…

Ah… She thought, realizing what his plan was. She hacked a chunk out of the wall herself. The ceiling shouldn’t be able withstand too much of its foundations being cut away.…[Read more]