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@ellette-giselle

The only thing I would say was when it said Cassian “ran, trying to outrun himself”

Actually it was “Cassian ran, trying to outrun time itself”.

That still might grate a little bit because of ran/outrun, so I changed it a little bit.

Also, from the perspective of someone who doesn’t know the full story and really is like a reade…

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@everyone

Sorry for not getting back to you guys! I admit I did get a little overwhelmed…WHY ARE THERE SO MANY HOLES IN MY STORY LIKE DOES IT SUCK THAT MUCH????

Such is life XD

Don’t worry…you guys are helping me a lot! I’m a sensitive person and writing’s something really close to my heart so when I get all these things I’m doing wrong I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I read the last two chapters and that hit me hard too!!!

I almost cried….😭😭😭💔💔

I need to read it all the way through again!

You have a beautiful story and I can’t wait to see what God does with it!

(And I understand perfectly about why you started before Marcus converted, it makes sense now!)

Wait a second… is there no firework emoji??

@ellette-giselle

Happy 4th of July!! 😃😄

@ellette-giselle

I think I’ve decided on a character but I’m still trying to write an adequate description for you. So I should be finished at some point today or maybe tomorrow.

Your drawing of Shadow’s character looks sooo good!

@anyone…

heh heh… I made a board for Tsunami Sayre (Flazzy’s mom). Not fully sure that I like it, but it’ll work for now. 😊😊

@ellette-giselle

I’d join too…except I don’t write enough to have a competition XDD

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, I love that chapter. Sef and Lilitu are adorable.

@savannah_grace2009

You’re right, it does come across as a bit extreme. But Kratos was/is a representation of every Andromedan race, and it’s showing how EVERYONE treats Paynes. Paynes aren’t even seen as “people” anymore (think WWII during the holocaust, except there aren’t any sympathizers). I can make him less…idk, happy that this is happening,…

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@grcr

Thank you!!! <3

@rae

I didn’t know Sef and Lilitu knew each other that long!

Yeah me neither… 

I just came up with it as I was writing it XD

@freed_and_redeemed

I was expecting to not be able to type cuz the keyboard would be fuzzy, but I was pleasantly surprised!

Good for Leon!

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@savannah_grace2009

Awwww, so cute <333

I didn’t know Sef and Lilitu knew each other that long!

@freed_and_redeemed

Awh. Don’t crush my hopes like that! I was so happy for Leon before I got to the end. 😠

Im kidding, but seriously. He was so close… 😭😭

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I got it. Sorry about not replying, but doing so would tempt me to disclose some of my thoughts before July 11th.

Thx for checking though!

@savannah_grace2009

Awwwwww, that is so cute!! I like how you’re connecting the families in this chapter.

“Hi!” she smiled at him. “Do you want to be friends? Look at my drawing! My name’s Sef, what’s your name?”

The boy sat down next to her. “What is it?” he tilted his head to the side, staring at the drawing.

Sef was offended. How c…

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DROPPING THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Just so you know, it’s not edited…heh…heh…

so just bear with me XD

Tags: @jonas @grcr @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle @rae @and-my-brain-stopped-working

“Please! Someone help me!” Neveah gasped for breath, frantically scanning the crowds for a familiar face.

Where could Sef have gon…

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