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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Alright, I’m gonna add another character with Vlydia.
Riina
Riina (Pronounced “Ree-een-a”) Riina is a friend of Vlydia, but they are very unalike. Riina is casual and a bit mischievous. She considers basically everything Vlydia does “boring.” She uses a different type of crystal, which are light blue. They are the same as Vlydia’s except that…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
No, I didn’t. I have watched that movie though. I remember it being good.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
K, I’m just going to dump her in dance lessons cause everyone else seems to be there lol. I’ll make her thief Saoirse rn, I think she’ll be more fun than lady Saoirse, though she’ll probably switch at some point.
Saoirse
Saoirse walked purposefully past the desk and the woman standing behind it.
“Hang on.”
“What?” Saoirse asked.
“Boots…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I think it’s Irish.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
You have permission to say ‘Sah-o-rees’ in your head, I still do it sometimes :p
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
What language invented such a ridiculous spelling?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
It’s a real name, and that’s how you say it.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ok, I’ll introduce my character.
Saoirse (seer-sha) (no last name atm)
I’ll make her seventeen here, though she’s normally closer to twentyish.
She has light gray hair and light eyes, almost clear white in color, and pale skin scattered with freckles. She’s only about 5’1”. She’ll either be wearing an elegant dress or a rough tunic, trouse…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
Ohhh… that all makes sense. I was wondering if there was a biblical underpinning to this, with the name Jesse.
To me it wasn’t clear that he had been gone. Maybe I just missed that detail. If you make sure that’s clear, then I think it works.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
It’s also funny how restrictive they are on shoes. I mean what shoes are allowed? lol.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
That’s better. There are still a few questions I have. Why was the king completely unaware of what was going on, but then able to easily fix it? What does he usually do that he was unaware of these problems? Why did he happen to talk to Mason? Those are the main ones. The story is a lot clearer overall.
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Ruth replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
Much better!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I can see that you did. …that’s a first…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Okay. Weird. A razor knife isn’t a particularly dangerous weapon. I just thought it was funny that the school is allowing literally any weapon that isn’t a firearm, but not things like paper. Irl, schools tend to be super restrictive about weapons.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ok, I knew it had some connection to cough drops.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Look up, I botched your simple tag.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@jomas @highscribeofaetherium
A menthol is what a cough drop is called. It’s on the couch drop bags in the stores.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I’m pretty sure it’s an ingredient in cough drops??
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
What’s a menthol?
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