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Ruth replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m a personal fan of Ransom, but I think that might be because it’s unusual, sounds cool and begins with a ‘R’…
- I think Ezra is a nice name, it means “Jehovah helps.”
- Jack sounds like something neat to me for whatever reason
- Aiden means “little fire”. It’s an Irish name.
- I also personally like Felix.
Idk if this is…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
This is a new topic for my Celestiar series set on Ildin. I don’t know how many books this will be, because I’ve only been working on the first one. Again, as with the Adonial Saga, “the Ildin Saga” is a working name, but not the final one.
I’m switching my attention from the Adonial Saga to this one. I have a couple reasons why. First of all,…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I don’t find that particularly difficult.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
For me the struggle is with the lengths of the notes and not the note name. Especially with shorter notes, it’s often hard for me to tell.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I think @HighScribe is correct. It appeared in my notifs, but isn’t here. It should be in your activity though, so you could get it back that way.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@princescachronicle22
I think Wyoh ate your RP… 🤔
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, great! I will warn you that transcribing from sound to written music is probably my biggest weakness as a composer, but if you do post it, I will do my very best. I should be able to figure it out given enough time.
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @jonas @calyhuge @beth-torres @grcr @smiley @whalekeeper @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @acancello @keilah-h @princesachronicle22 @idk
I just got a great idea, but I’m not sure if it is so great.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh man, guys, I think I’m more insane than usual…I just sang that song while in Alpha’s character cloak, and I’m crying. Like tears on my face and a runny nose. And now I’m wondering…
WHY DID I KILL HER?!?!!
But alas, history is written, and I cannot alter it.@jonas @whoever else would like it in lines @whalekeeper
Not sure if I’m…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m not very good at coming up with lyrics, but I like what you have. I also write music, so if you happened to need help with that part of the process (assuming you are writing music to go with the words), I would be happy to give advice. It might help if you arranged the words in lines. That would at least help me see it clearly, because i…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
It’s soooo good!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
I SAW THAT ONE!! It’s so funny!!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @jonas @esther-c @smily @whalekeeper @hybridlore @idk
Ignore me if you wish, I literally just typed in tags since i didn’t know what else to do (If you can tell)
I’m trying to write a song for Alpha Grath. This is for after he looses Emmie (if you don’t know who she is, she was the love of his…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
But the years grow longer, and the gap wider…You. Are. Gone.
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
Rocket the rabbit
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
@acancello
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
LOL 😂
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I think that is awesome! I don’t have any theological problems with that. I tend to avoid doing robots and stuff, because I don’t believe that such a creation would have a soul, and I would usually rather avoid writing about those topics. I haven’t thought about how that would extend to a human created in a lab. There’s nothing biological about a…[Read more]
*either not dither
I don’t like to play with sentient and rational robots, honestly those creep me out. The idea of Alpha being originally a a robot made out of flesh came from me just thinking about him. It was really weird, I was talking as Alpha to his best friend Terry and it just spilled out. I was making it up as I went, but it sounded like it was a set piece…[Read more]
That makes sense to me. I think we’re pretty much on the same page.
I haven’t thought about it in depth, but from first glance, I don’t have a problem with it either. I guess it would depend also on how he was created. Did they take human DNA to create him? If that’s the case, then I think he would have a soul just like any other person, because the rest of us are created with human DNA, even though the process of…[Read more]
He was made from mixed DNA, to give him the traits Grathmere wanted. I believe most likely, he was made the weird 3D printer way at first, and developed from there.
He was actually interestingly enough, not made to have any moral compass. He was supposed to be a heartless assassin that did what Grathmere wished. He’d have limited free will, but…[Read more]
I think that’s a really good idea. I don’t find any theological issues with it. Er, I don’t really have any other comments ATM 😅
@rae
I like the idea! I think it makes sense that he would be without breath at first, and I think that God could definitely give him a soul if He chose
Ooh, ok. So I see where your doubts are coming from. Here’s my opinion…
I believe that as soon as a baby is conceived in the womb, he (referring to either gender in this case) is a human being with a soul that is loved by God. Obviously he cannot physically breathe yet because he’s only a few cells. But when he is born, God is ultimately the O…[Read more]
@rae
I really like this idea!!!
I think this is a fun idea. I don’t think there’s any theological problems. Is this your fantasy, or something else? If the first, then I wouldn’t think theological and scientific problems should be your primary concern, because what you say goes. Even if your more into hard worldbuilding, you can build up a distinct theological system that is…[Read more]
@thearcaneaxiom Yeah, this is in my sci-fi/fantasy Galaxy. Alpha is one of my main charries.
I don’t think this is too weird an idea for a sci-fi universe. It’s basically like God put literal, actual life in a body which was built, not born. Like a machine built out of flesh and bone, it was working, but it wasn’t alive quite yet. I think the way he explains it is a little strange, but that’s an explanation and can be modified a bit.
My only issue is that if his heart was going but not his breathing, he would die pretty quickly, so maybe he was effectively “dead” with neither organ working, and when they tried to “jump-start” him, his heart started but not his lungs, and then when they were confusedly trying to figure it out he started breathing.
That was a weird explanation, sorry….
It makes sense…in fact that was the way I pictured it in my mind, just Alpha sometimes says things weirdly, and leaves out parts.
I believe the term for during but still coming back to life by revival is called “clinically dead”. Not sure if Alpha falls under this or not, though…
Ok, good, it made sense…lol