Gwyndalf the Wise

@ellette-giselle yep!

Reading through it again, I realized most of my “improvements” were already there and I missed them, but there’s still something I can’t put my finger on that doesn’t make sense.

@ellette-giselle honestly hybridlore’s got a point. It happened as a result of their faith, yes, but it’s been long enough in the story that readers might not be paying attention to that. Also, no one’s brought up why they were captured. I’ll get into that more once I’m finished with math work so hold on a sec. I’m not against what’s about to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle ikr??

@ellette-giselle

Oh don’t worry. Things will be bad.

It’s crazy how this kind of sentence excites us.

Writers are nuts.

@theshadow thanks!

currently debating whether I should do some of my other ones today.

@godlyfantasy12 Go for it!!

@ellette-giselle wow, not even at the town yet and they’ve already gotten into a tangle!

I agree with Linus, drawing this out rather than having them immediately get rescued or escape or something makes it more interesting.

@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!

@freed_and_redeemed oooh! I like it so far! If you write any more please post it.

@godlyfantasy12

yall want me to post another scene?

Yes please!

@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka HIIIII!!!

Yessss Callan is…not good XD yall want me to post another scene?

@whalekeeper Yes, you go do that.

@theshadow Good points! I just read the original Dracula this year and I loved it and the characters so much.  And it is a really good example of good Christian horror.

@raxforge

I was waiting for either Syph to respond to Rax’s apology, or for @whalekeeper to start the class with Barnes as the teacher, but if both of them are busy, I can try to rp sometime soon. Maybe not tonight though.

@godlyfantasy12 heyyyy welcome back!!! Glad you’re back to writing your story. I don’t exactly have the time to give feedback yet, but I will TOTALLY be back tomorrow.

Dang it, I knew I shouldn’t have gotten one of these fancy new tvs. *starts aggressively pressing every button on my remote*

*gasp!* Whaley!? I don’t believe it

Now this is a news channel worth watching. *munches popcorn*

@koshka

Yeah. That. Everything you said. Same.