Gwyndalf the Wise

@rae Yep, but three dragons and only Nahim and Snake to fight them while they and the others are under attack still seems a bit unfair…..

I’ll be here in a little bit too!

@jonas good idea, have it come with one dragon though, because two (not counting the stone guardian) I think is a bit much for Snake, even with his powers, and I don’t really want another dragon to be attacking the heroes while the villains are doing the same.

Dis is gonna be a breeze 😎

@acancello

You’re not the only one! We eat at 5 too, lol.

@mineralizedwritings

Oh yeah, that’s something I easily forget about. Thanks for reminding me! I’ll definitely keep that in mind as I write and edit. 😊

@mineralizedwritings Thanks!

@whalekeeper

I just wanna give Lois a hug…

I think Lois would be good at giving hugs

Dante

One corner of Dante’s mouth twitched upwards into a half smile. As much as he wanted to, he did not get this kid. The others were easy. Cal wanted to learn, and he was loyal to Princess Kate and whatever country it was that they came from. Hugo was fri…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Whaaat? I would never.  *Hides plot idea notes*

@esther-c

Huh, I’ve never really thought of it that way before, but I think that’s the aspect of their relationship that I play off of in the second book to create more conflict. Man, I am going to be pondering over this all day. XD

XD glad I could make you think! It might be a good source of conflict for book 2, but I think it would be great if…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Alrighty! Here we go!

1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.

Um, I wouldn’t say it’s boring. I think the pacing is pretty good. Honestly, boring is so subjective, so no, it’s not boring. Because I don’t mind things moving a little slower at the beginning. Some people m…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yep!

Awesome!

Ev is obviously pretty reckless. He doesn’t seem to care about getting into danger, and I’m not really sure to describe his personality but he seems playful?

And Ami is sweet and responsible. She really cares about Ev and wants to protect him.

I think you just nailed them both in a few sentences. XD That’s exactly what…[Read more]

@rae

I may answer all your questions later, but for now, I am drawn into the story.

Alrighty, awesome! 👍

I see potential for this story to be better if you had at least one chapter before this that introduced us to daily life with the Orb. It would drawn me in more, and make us care about Ev and Ami more than just plopping them and the plot in our…

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@mineralizedwritings

Thank you so much Esther! I’ve been doubting my writing recently and really comparing myself to others, so it makes me happy you like it. I started writing in present tense as soon as I started writing, so after the initial hurdle (it was hard lol, I kept using said) it’s been pretty natural, because I don’t know how write…

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@jonas

I’m EST, so rn, 5 is a hit or miss for me. But I’ll try my best to show up.

@whalekeeper

My world sometimes makes the mental, physical.”

Oh my gosh that is such a cool concept. Stop making me want to read books that don’t even exist yet

@freedomwriter76

I’m still not getting notified when you tag me 😭

anyways they looks super cute together!

@loopylin

Wow those hands look amazing!!

@savannah_grace2009

1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.

Nope! Super intriguing!

2. Is Sef relatable? Can you really feel her and does she become real in your mind?

Very relatable!

3. Was there anywhere that you were confused?

At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make so…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thanks for giving specific question, it really helps!

Answering as if I’ve never heard your writing before XD

1. Were you drawn into the story right away?

I was confused as to why the story had so much action before a exposition. It felt like information overload on many things, and I couldn’t tell what was important. Should, I think…[Read more]

@acancello

Woah!! I’m so proud of you!! Good luck on your edits! 💖💖🎉🎉