Gwyndalf the Wise

@freed_and_redeemed

I know you’ve already gotten a lot of replies, but I’d be happy to help you brainstorm later today! We can even coordinate being active at the same time if you want some back and forth brainstorming! :))

@the_lost_journal

Ahh! I’m so sorry for not replying soon! The notification email got buried in my inbox! 😭

Anyway, it sounds like a really cool story!! It’s giving me Wingfeather Saga vibes, is that what inspired the concepts?? I would love to hear more about the characters and their personalities/backstories!!

@hybridlore @jonas @whalekeeper @rae @raxforge @grcr @ellette-giselle

Felicity- Group 1, Elderstrand

“What are these things?”

Felicity furrowed her brow. “I thought at first they might be clickmen, but they’re silent, no machinery. But they aren’t ink animated, either, probably, because there was something inside. They definitely aren’t peopl…[Read more]

@jonas @whalekeeper 👍

*2 and 1/2 down

@hybridlore

Felicity- Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand 

Felicity got shakily to her feet.

“Yep. Didn’t feel-” she stumbled suddenly, and Sara caught her.

“… a thing,” she finished. Her eyes were half glazed over, but she was still scanning the nearby area, ready to throw herself at any threat that came close.

“You okay?” she asked, trying to deflect.

@jonas ok cool thx

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae@grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @jonas

3 Ironwalkers down, 9 to go, if anyone was wondering. Pretty sure there were originally a dozen.

I’ll hold off on having Felicity fight anymore.

@ellette-giselle
That looks great! And that R is very impressive I love the swirls

@freed_and_redeemed Aww Ryo! So cute <3

I love seeing your character drawings

@jonas I was imagining the Ironwalkers as just enchanted suits of armor before. The fact that there’s something inside but they still don’t make any noise makes them a lot scarier.

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper

Felicity- Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand

Felicity took the staff gratefully. Her knuckles were raw and…[Read more]

I think I’ll add another character after the fight is over, if that’s alright. Or guess technically two characters. One and a half? I should go back and check how many character slots we’re allowed.

@whalekeeper Yay! Freakiness is the intention :]

And yes, lots of world building. And re-world building. I still have zero plot tho

Oh whoops we’ve been forgetting to tag @hybridlore

@ellette-giselle My character doesn’t even have military training. She’s just… very determined.
@grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @jonas @rae

Felicity— Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand

“Clickmen.” Felicity shuddered at the sound of metal footsteps. It was clear as they got closer that they were not the machines Felicity was used to, but she didn’t care…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint oooh awesome! and you’re welcome!

a little like this but a grizzly bear instead of a polar bear, and more vicious?

(not my art)

If you’ve ever seen the first Puss in Boots movie from Dreamworks, there’s a giant mama goose that actually does a good amount of damage to the town she invades while looking for her chick, who the main characters stole. Basing on that alone (I’ve never met a free-roaming goose, that I remember at least), I can see just an ordinary giant goose…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint oh, good to know I’m not alone then! It’s not discouraging at all, it’s just one of those thoughts you have when you’re trying to sleep but your brain won’t let you. Y’know.

And I’m glad you have an explanation ready for why this section feels rushed. Makes sense.

and bruh that Canada meme! We have somethin’ like that…[Read more]

@grcr you’re welcome 😁

@linus-smallprint ooh interesting!!

Alan’s character development is showing through! It does seem a tiny bit sudden, but I don’t know cause I’ve never actually seen a person get saved and them follow their life immediately afterward. I was saved when I was really young and effectively don’t even remember it, so I can’t even use myself as an…[Read more]