Gwyndalf the Wise

@ellette-giselle wow….interesting section! I feel a bit bad for the one who believed right before the priest slashed his throat. But I agree with Leon, the sadness is tempered by the fact that they are in the presence of God Himself now.

I’ll stop info dumping on the roleplay forum now.

since I explained Crosshair’s situation though I’ll explain his:

he was just betrayed by his own family. He was adopted, although his adoptive parents are dead, and when he met his biological parents they were literally just like “nope” and ditched him within like an hour, leaving him and the rest of his team alone in a broken down underwater…[Read more]

@whalekeeper they really are the GOATs.

Having no emotional connection to Sniper, my eyes immediately go to the art technique. I’m heartless. XD

LOL!

it’d be weirder if you did have an emotional connection to him with no prior knowledge of what’s going on.

@trailblazer I remember the Narnia quote!

ok but looking at it even closer you can see little shockwaves from the bullets right before they strike his belly/chest. That’s DETAILED.

@loopylin @the_lost-journal oh man these are flippin’ hilarious!!

@whalekeeper haha! I’m decently nice to my characters…..sometimes. There’s torture on the menu, but it’s not always.

I like the line work on that panel, verrry nice.

my brain: he just got SHOT and is BLEEDING OUT IN A FLOODING UNDERWATER FACILITY and you’re commenting on the LINEWORK????

jk I love the linework too and have tried to replicate…[Read more]

@whalekeeper LOLLLLLLLLLLL

mentally broken snipers are my boys

@whalekeeper ahhh whoops!

well since you’ve already been spoiled, I’ll explain: Crosshair saves another trooper’s life, but the Empire isn’t willing to help him and leaves them both to die in the freezing cold. so Crosshair’s just like “forget this” and decides to defect from the Empire (finally).

Not before he nearly freezes and the other guy…[Read more]

I wasn’t responsible for this either:

slight blood warning I guess? it’s not really that bad but still

hope I don’t get kicked off the site for this lol

he lives btw, he’s all scarred up but he makes it out okay. After 6 hours of being operated on.

“speaking of wise women, did I tell you I saw Luigi walk into a liquor store and he waved and smiled at me and my brothers” -my friend

“Don’t you wish it was your job to get up in the morning and scream?” -Dad

“One day I’ll be an upstairs neighbor and learn tap dancing.” -my cousin

“We’re in Japan. No one’s poor in Japan.” -a different…[Read more]

Or this:

(again, spoiler warning, I’m so sorry)

@whalekeeper lol

Although, in my defense, I’m not responsible for some of the stuff that happened to my stolen adopted characters.

For example, you can’t say I was behind this:

(u did watch season 2 of bad batch right?? I hope so cause if not, sorry for the spoilers)

@whalekeeper

Does the hunger games thingy count as fan fiction though?

Also don’t worry about role playing. Take all the time you need. I’m kinda busy rn too. (Finally got a job yayyyyyyy)

@whalekeeper lollll so true……

as kp’s resident weird-fanfiction writer, can confirm.

@ellette-giselle Well I think it’s great so far, so yep, you did your job.

@ellette-giselle

ohhhh.

By Draft 4 pretty much everything is solidified, right?

And I don’t mean “don’t make them die through the entire story,” just “don’t kill them this early in the book without a good replacement.”

Speaking of which, I don’t put swearing in my animations….lol. That’s not what I meant.

It was the animation style and the characters that made my dad think of me.

@ellette-giselle

Hmm. We’ll have to see.

What draft is this? If this is a first or second draft I could forgive you for killing them off and yeeting us into some random’s POV, cause it’s still rough and maybe you just figured out that killing them works for the story. But if it’s the final draft, almost ready for publishing, and you did that, I…[Read more]