@gwyndalf-the-wise
Active 8 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Oooh, I like it!! I could definitely feel and experience what Jonathan was feeling and going through.
The only suggestion I would have would be to eliminate some of the passive voice (“The floor was sinking…” “…his brother was on his hands and knees…”). It will tighten up the prose and draw the reader in more.
But that’…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Thanks for reaching out, Kefa!! I’d love to chat some more!! 🤗
Hmm… my WIP…
Well, I have a few, but a couple of those have been put on the back burner for now. They were mostly ones written while I was trying to figure out my genre. Which, I’ve decided, is probably gonna be contemporary young adult fiction and histori…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Yeah, I mean, it’s really no big deal to me because they’re spelled slightly different (Halle and Hallie), and how they look and act is completely different so they’re very different people in my head. 🤷🏻♀️
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Your mc house looks cool! What mod is it?
Btw what do you think of the new update so far?
Oh also I got the first clone wars dvd at the thrift store! It’s only 3 episodes but it’s the first three and I like it so far.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Loved that snippet! I like how the reader is just as confused as Jonathan, I kinda felt like I was reading an anime lol.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@esther-c lol
My character names are usually pretty unique, but I often source them from people I know or other characters with similar names, and change a letter or two. Or I name them a word that relates to their personality or stick two words that sound good together (that works better for fantasy stories than modern or contemporary ones)
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Pov you just notice that you created a new character with a name that nobody you know irl has but literally meet someone with that name a few months later
😑😑
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle lolllll I think I saw that meme somewhere before
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle ohhh ok.
She looks great in that pose!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle ehhhh I have weird conversations here too.
Do you think Linus Smallprint has forgiven us for taking over his chat to discuss the finer points of being obsessed with a character?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle Emily’s cool. Who or what is she protecting with that gun?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle lol that last one
I have a charrie who would be the same. “Wear a mask” people say, and then he shows up wearing like a ski mask kind of a thing, and everyone freaks out for an entirely different reason.
@power whaaaaa? lolllll
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle green ember quotes!!
ngl I love the writing in that series. It’s the perfect balance of serious and funny sometimes.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@whalekeeper wowwww that’s a great drawing!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle pffft that was a weird conversation lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 month ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 month ago
@theshadow to be completely honest I don’t know where most of my ideas come from. I just make them up one day and run with it. TF2’s crazy lore means anything goes, unlike most fandoms where you kinda have to stick to a few rules about worldbuilding, so I can run wild with this stuff.
and lol I actually wasn’t aware there was a real salam…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle THE GUN ONES BRUHHH
lol
My brother’s OC, Windchill, is basically just that.
Is that dude preparing for an apocalypse or something????
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Why do I always somehow miss all the major conflicts that happen in this school? My twins leave Rory and then like two rps later this whole thing with the agents starts XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Felicity
“Well, I’m in art and pre algebra…” she drifted off mid sentence, thinking hard. Then she laughed. “Honestly, I don’t know the rest. It’s only my second day and I’ve been skipping class so much. Drives Lois crazy. If we were in any of the same classes, I wouldn’t know.”
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