@gretald
Active 8 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Daeus replied to the topic Switching Between POVs in the forum Characters 8 years, 9 months ago
@supermonkey42 I don’t think it would be too confusing as long as the MC doesn’t know what other characters are thinking because…that would be creepy.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 9 months ago
@ingridrd Thankee.
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Daeus replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@ethryndal Just thought I should add that How To Write A Sizzling Synopsis is a helpful book for writing a synopsis. You’ve probably heard me say that before, but what can I say.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper Noice. 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 9 months ago


A few concept art drawings for my WIP.
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Right here.
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@winter-rose Ah well…when King @daeus banished me and then let me back in as a knight, I decided not to plunder gold anymore. Ice cream was enough for me. 😀
And now I must depart, but I wrote 1208. Have fun with your unicorn! 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
😀 I sleep very nicely actually. Thanks to the soft bed that my characters don’t have. 😀
Yes, precious. *gollum gollum* It’s very nice, very nice. *gollum*
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@winter-rose Ooh. Mechanical unicorns. That does sound cool!
Then I must not be a writer.
I keep the soft beds and chocolate for myself. Selfish, I know.
The story is called Regulation so far. I’ll see if it changes, but that’s that as of now. It’s a futuristic utopia.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@winter-rose 😀 Hiya Frodo!
Er… A weird unicorn? For art?
I’m working on writing my new novel. Something bad is going to happen soon! Yay! Uh, I mean…uh. Oh no. That’s terrible. Poor MCs… *sorrynotsorry*
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@jess-penrose @dekreel @winter-rose @perfectfifths @daughteroftheking @that_writer_girl_99 Anyone up for word war? 😀 Or just being here? 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@ingridrd Oooh, ice cream. This is the best book launch ever. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@Ethryndal definitely better. I love it just how it is, but as Daeus mentioned, you might cut out the first bit about her step-sister without any damage and probably with benefits.
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Daeus replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@ethryndal Like normal, I love the voice you use.
You might keep a long version like this for use on your blog, but if you’re going to use this on a sales page or book cover, yeah, it needs to be short.
You can probably make the point about her being heroine material shorter and cut out the part about her step-sister
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Ingrid replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@ethryndal *wiggles eyebrows* I wanna read it…although, I feel like I’ve just read the whole book. 😉 It is a tad too long, but that’s nothing a little editing can’t fix. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@sam-kowal I can see how it must be fun to have Stan as a dragon. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@Ethryndal your sneaking suspicion is absolutely correct, but otherwise this is absolutely brilliant.
Seriously, and I almost forgave it for being too long because all of it was awesome. So yeah. It’s good. *vigorous nodding*
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Ingrid replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@daeus *highfive* And just for good measure……
🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
Um…sorry, Stan. You can’t eat him. 😛
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