@gretald
Active 8 years, 10 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ingrid replied to the topic Anyone Admit an Affection About Animation? in the forum Film 8 years, 9 months ago
@leumeister I guess CG would be my favorite…hmm, I like the Despicable Me movies, Tangled, and Toy Story. I’ve never written a story with having it animated in mind…neat idea though.
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Short Story Critique? *hopeful glance around* in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@ingridrd Aww, thanks! And thank you for your comment! It was much needed 😀
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Ingrid replied to the topic Anyone Admit an Affection About Animation? in the forum Film 8 years, 9 months ago
@leumeister I definitely enjoy watching animation…the rest of it doesn’t interest me much. That’s super cool that you like it! (Nice alliteration in the title, by the way.) 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Short Story Critique? *hopeful glance around* in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@sleepwalkingmk *wipes away happy Christmas tears*  This is adorable and heartwarming. I literally had one suggestion. (Btw, I am “Anonymous” on the document.) Brilliant work! 🙂
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Short Story Critique? *hopeful glance around* in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Thanks so much! I’ll keep that in mind as I edit it.
@supermonkey42 Thank you 🙂
@jane-maree Thank you for your comments! They’ve helped so much! 😀
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Ingrid replied to the topic The 12 Kapeefer Days of Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@mariposa It’s just perfect. This definitely calls for a party. Chocolate, anyone?
🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate I think I recognize the second one from the Avengers: Infinity War trailer… Is it Thanos? And is three Ultron? I’m not sure though. My Avengers knowledge is a bit rusty 😛
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The 12 Kapeefer Days of Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@mariposa This is fantastic. 😀
Tagging @the-real-kapeefer for good measure.
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Kate Flournoy posted an update 8 years, 9 months ago
@theliterarycrusader question… how did you get your blog link to be an actual link in your signature? 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic 12 Kapeefer Days of Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Mariposa I think I’m dying. XD XD XD
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Daeus replied to the topic The 12 Kapeefer Days of Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@mariposa These are great. 😀
I believe Gracie and Sierra are @graciegirl and @sierra-r
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The 12 Kapeefer Days of Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Mariposa good heavens, I think I’m dying. XD XD XD
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SleepwalkingMK started the topic Short Story Critique? *hopeful glance around* in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
Hello! I was wondering if anyone would like to read over a little short story I wrote for a Christmas contest. (The criteria for the contest are: “anything Christmasy” and “under 800 words.”) This story is about 600 words. This is the link (I’m not sure if it would all fit in this text box): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B0-tYspZd5NDCmeDdp6C8…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic And for "Gosh-sakes", watch your language! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
I didn’t mind that section, but I definitely know some people who would be bothered. As long as you have a connection, cause yeah, like Kate said, it kinda did feel drop you random in the middle of gore and evil for no reason, out of context like that.
About the swear words things. Obviously, top swear words are out. Then you get into the picky…[Read more]
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Sierra replied to the topic In the beginning…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@aratrea Clearly I need to get on the forum more, but putting someone’s username underneath their actual name to save all that extra clicking was a stroke of genius.
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Sierra replied to the topic In the beginning…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@amy-l-klob *sweeps hat off and bows with a flourish* Always an honor to be of service to writers of the Kingdom 😉
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Alia replied to the topic Christmas Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel, any ideas on how I can tweak them? And which ones need major tweaking?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic And for "Gosh-sakes", watch your language! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Xonos-darkgrate what @Daeus and the rest already said, basically, on the general subject.
I did, however, find your excerpt slightly disturbing, which is odd, because I’m not usually disturbed by that kind of stuff. It may have been because it lacked subtlety and I kind of just felt like I had my face shoved in a pool of blood for no reason and…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic And for "Gosh-sakes", watch your language! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate *shudders* I don’t think it was too dark. And it’s very well-written!
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm Dreaming of a White Christmas with Every Christmas Card I Write in the forum Art 8 years, 9 months ago
@mariposa Yes…but very ill indeed. 🙂
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