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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Skyraptor
For once, a thought came through loud and clear from the tiger–Evander, he said he was called.
She could see him swimming in the ocean, chased by a pack of dog-like creatures.
Odd….who would go up against that huge of a cat? even in a pack?
Gus, the sheep-like one (that’s what he is right whaley?), explained…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Ooo, excerpts. Thank you for sharing! I like this Blair and Shannon. (Poetry, huzzah!)
I also relished the way you incorporated the poem he was reading into the opening. When the poem stopped and the dialogue began, it was like when the curtains on a stage are first pulled back.
I do agree that the descriptions were a little hard to get…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Cool! I didn’t have time to read it in full detail yet, but one thing that stood out to me skimming it was the description felt a bit heavy-handed. First you describe Blair, then his room, then Shannon, and then Belle. All of them were pretty long paragraphs of just description, and it gets a bit tiring.
Anyways, just what I noticed. I’ll…[Read more]
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Whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Gus
The cat drooped.
“I’m sorry, Evander, for whatever must’ve happened to you,” Gus said, bowing his head respectfully. “At least now, you’re right safe, and ain’t that a blessing?”
One of only a few blessings. But it was better than being given nothing at all.
Gus furrowed his snowy brow, and tapped a rhythm with his hoof i…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 1 month ago
I hope so!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 1 month ago
@grcr @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
Yeah i just tried and the green bar thingy loads but then it goes away and nothing happens. I’ve hit refresh multiple times but it doesn’t work 🙁
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 1 month ago
I tried a half-hour ago and it still doesn’t work :(((
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 1 month ago
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Whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Evander’s so sweet XP
Gus
Gus came a little closer, and tilted his head, his large set of horns rotating to a strange angle. “Gus. It’s nice to meet you, Evander. ‘Scuse me for interrupting you with a rude scream, while you were drinking. I don’t usually scream like that.”
He wasn’t sure how to interpret the cat’s expressions. He hoped…[Read more]
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Whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(GRCR you sound like you’re doing a quiet villain laugh XD)
Gus
“No,” Gus said, still slightly breathless, hitching up his overalls. “I’ve never been here before. I was wonderin’ if you ruled the island. You sure look it.”
He felt the little lizard brushing past his ankles in the grass.
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Whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Gus
Gus perked up at the voice, and almost immediately relaxed, his trembling, fleecy body easing to a soft quiver.
He stood up, and faced the giant cat.
The cat’s pelt, streaked with light and shadow, rippled with muscle as it flinched back. But, after a moment, it padded a few steps closer.
“How pretty you are,” Gus breathed.
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Lydibug replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
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Whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Gus
“Are you okay? What did you step on?”
Gus bit down on his hand accidentally, and tried to blink away the sudden tears. They tricked down his chin as he looked down.
The speaker was a strange lizard in the grass beside him.
Gus smiled politely through the tears, and mumbled under his breath. “Quiet, little ‘un. There’s…[Read more]
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Whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(Gus won’t see Skyraptor yet)
Gus
The little fox did not follow. Instead, faint snores made their way to Gus’ ears.
Gus nodded, satisfied, and tripping his way down the edge of the water a ways, until he came to a soggy bank, covered in a thin layer of silt.
It trickled down a small but rocky slope, the source somewhere in t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@grcr you mind if Skyraptor meets your charrie? if you don’t want to just say he didn’t notice her.
Skyraptor
Faint thoughts led her down the river. Surely there was life here besides her.
Sentient minds, be they animal, human, or alien, were different than those of mere beasts…. This thought she was tracing was that of a being who could talk…[Read more]
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Whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @grcr
Thanks y’all!!! <3<3 I feel so confident now! I had NO idea how to draw him, since I didn’t have a strong mental image for his facial structure (so haAaAaRD) but there he is, and he makes me smile <3
It looks like Wanda!! I don’t even watch a lot of Marvel, but it’s definitely her :D…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 1 month ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 1 month ago
Btw, ‘recycling’ old pfp still works (I think) so if you had any older ones that you replaced without actually hitting the delete button, that should work.
Yeah, stuff like this happens.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 1 month ago
@grcr I haven’t been able to upload a profile pic either since I joined. It says it loaded but there’s nothing there.
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HighScribe replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 1 month ago
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