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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @rae @trailblazer @grcr @acancello @highscribeofaetherium @mineralizedwritings (I’m missing someone, right?)
Ellis
”Follow me,” said the woman with a crown. Ellis ducked behind a bush as she left the house, followed by nine other people. None of them were older than Ellis, and some of them were dressed in the most…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Thanks. I have weird moments where I write stuff that takes my own breath away! That’s what comes when you spend your childhood sticking your nose in flowers! And playing in streams. And with baby goats. And chasing butterflies. And hunting snakes. And digging tunnels (thankfully that never went to far!) And daydreaming. Yeah, I basically…[Read more]
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Aranel started the topic Killing Characters in the forum Plotting 3 years ago
@euodia-vision @trailblazer @hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom @acancello @esther-c @jonas @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @power @rae and anyone else:
What are some good reasons to kill MCs? I have to kill two of them in this one scene because if I don’t, the only option is to use a Deus ex machina, or throw out the scene.
Basically, two characters are…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I can’t really, cause my character is still separate from everyone else.
I think we just need someone to get things going. If nobody has anything they specifically want to happen before they leave the house, someone should just go for it and start them on there way. How will they know where to go?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Huh. Looks like it’s spelled right, so I don’t know what the problem would be.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I find that if you copy and paste tags they sometimes don’t work. You can avoid it by deleting and rewriting the last letter.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Yeah, that happens sometimes 🤷♀️
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Flaz would drive me utterly insane if I met him in real life 😂🤣
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Flaz is great 😂
“What? F—Flaz?” Lane looked at him, “W-Where did you come from?”
“The land of endless clothes and uncountable tangles.” Flaz crossed his arms, “I have come from where the moths live happily and mice can chew through every garment that now lays on the floor.”
“You mean the basement?” Lane sighed, “How did we not see y…
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium
Who’s going next? I can’t, because my character basically has to wait until the rest of the group leaves the house. Unless he just goes on ahead and doesn’t meet up with the rest of them until they get to…wherever they’re going? That…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Sounds good.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Yeah 😅 though to be fair, his planet is smaller than Earth, and thus has less gravity so people tend to be a bit taller. He’s still a couple inches taller than most people though.
I was just talking about what the general area looked like.
lol 😂
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium
I’m just going to post Ellis’s arrival scene now. It ends kind of abruptly because I don’t have anything for him to do before he encounters the rest of the group.
Ellis
One moment, the din of battle rang on Ellis’s ears as he charged t…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Mmm, good idea. *thinks of all the annoying things Flaz might say while on the journey*
Oh my, Flaz is going to drive Ellis absolutely crazy!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Okay, thanks! Those were the ones I could think of too, so I guess that just be it.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer
By the way, could someone give me a quick rundown of what characters are in here already? How many are there, and what are their names? I think I’ve read it all at this point, so I’ll probably recognize them based on their names, but I can’t remember who is he…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Alrighty! He sounds pretty cool!! 😄 (And so does Conviction)
Thanks!
Hmm… near a city would make sense… or even possibly near her castle (or wherever the queen is). It might be fun if they interacted with village people and all, and had to get directions.
Yeah, I was thinking it might be cool if they had to journey a bit before they got the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer
(I tried to edit this, but it disappeared when I did, so hopefully this doesn’t tag everyone twice.)
So where is the house now? I know it transported them across worlds, but where, geographically, is it? I would assume it is somewhere near a city, since they…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings@rae @trailblazer
So where is the house now? I know it transported them across worlds, but where, geographically, is it? I would assume it is somewhere near a city, since they were transported there to help the queen? My character will probably just be dropped in separately o…[Read more]
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