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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
This is actually kind of funny because I just finished a series of ten short stories about a magical candymaker. But down to prompt business.
His sweets glimmered in the dim light, glowing with the untold possibilities of a thousand wishes.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
You go to check on your homemade rock candy experiment one day only to find that the string is clustered with living coals.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus ha! Well, I mean… I guess technically that does work. 😛
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Christi-Eaton Heh…I’m pretty sure. But thanks. 😀
@Daeus The villain even mentioning a kettle for any reason is too perfect.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Christi-Eaton …I’m pretty sure. But thanks. 😀
@Daeus The villain even mentioning a kettle for any reason is too perfect.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus yep. *grins* His name is Freckles.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Whew I took awhile writing that post…you’d not posted again when I started. Sorry ’bout that. 😛
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Whew I took awhile writing that post…you’d not posted again when I started. 😛
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@Winter-Rose I agree with the others about the awesome characterization and all, though I do have something to say that’s maybe weird…no offense meant in the least of course and I know you know that so good. XD
Um…I don’t really see the point/purpose of the story…I mean, it’s not giving us anything good to strive for or promoting any…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Love it! That prompt about the villain just makes me laugh. Ah, if only… 😛
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
I can’t see the picture properly because the monitor on this laptop is doing funky things to the screen, but I can see enough to agree with the others. It does look well done though, and *shudder* I’m purty sure I couldn’t do something like that!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
I can’t see the picture properly because the monitor on this laptop is doing funky things to the screen, but I can see enough to agree with the others. It does look well done though, and *shudder* I’m purty sure I couldn’t do something like that!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
I’m going to agree with @Sarah-H and @Ethryndal on the tone of the picture, but you did do an excellent job with the composition and balancing the colors. Good work also with the character’s reflection. Those are not easy! 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
I’m going to agree with @Sarah-H and @Ethryndal on the tone of the picture, but you did do an excellent job with the composition and balancing the colors. Good work also with the character’s reflection. Those are not easy! 😛
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@Rachelle Fourteen book series! 😮
Nah… Les Mis probably isn’t that long. It might seem longer ’cause it’s all in one chunk; but it’s only got 1460 pages. 😛@Ethryndal Ahem, read above line and be grateful. XD The Silmarillion’s only what, in the 300s at most?
I know though, the preface—his letter to his publisher Milton Someone-Or-Other I…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
You guys. Are. Amazing. Thank you so much!!!
@Daeus that is absolutely terrifying; I’m going to have to sleep with my stuffed leopard tonight to stave off nightmares. :’DMkay now, how about… candy?
You wake up in the middle of the night on Christmas Eve to unfamiliar footsteps creaking downstairs. Stumbling out of your room, you stagger down…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Wow, this is amazing Gabrielle. Hilarious. You did an excellent job with Sam’s voice. They pretty much already covered what needs covering. Thumbs up on characterization. I want the rest of this. 😉
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Due to a new plant virus, nearly all the earth’s vegetation has died. You are a potato farmer, one of only three left in the world, and last night someone broke into your garden.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Discussion for Video Seven: Negative Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus Oh, no I haven’t. I’ll keep my eyes peeled. 🙂
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Discussion for Video Seven: Negative Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 7 months ago
Merp…I just can’t think of anything I’ve read pr watched that has a negative arc…hmm.
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