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R. J. Wordsmith started the topic Mr. Nice guy in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Okay, so this is a story I wrote some time ago, and it is just a little bit different. I promise, it does have a happy ending, this is not another mailbox. Critiques, advice, suggestions, all are welcome. I suppose I should tag some people, so let me see…@kate-flournoy @kina-lamb @Emma-flournoy @dragon-snapper @graciegirl @Overcomer @ethryndal @i…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@r-j-wordsmith They really were such beautiful deaths. Besides maybe Bodhi getting blown up in his ship… But Jyn and Cassian’s… *wrings hands and weeps* I’m glad it didn’t show them lying on the ground dead or something, because that would have been morbid. But being enveloped in light is tragically awesome.
@widdrim VADER. HE GREW UP. I…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea Er…It’s an ice-cream giving frog. Not so bad, right? You’re the Wiser (Gandalf like character), Josiah Degrande, and its a long story. 😛
@jane-maree @daeus isn’t really an evil king. He just doesn’t want to see his kingdom destroyed by dragons or by the evil lord and his trolls. -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Homework for Video 16: Theme and Minor Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@Aratrea quite honestly it’s more long-winded-ness than anything else. ;P I’m working on it.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea I have no idea how it started. xD I think it had something to do with @Dragon-snapper ‘s story in which there was a King Daeus (evil overlord of ice-cream) and a Josiah who had a frog? Maybe?
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
The ink flowed forth onto the page, leaving magic and worlds in its wake.
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Sierra replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
How does Bible Bee actually work? I’m a Bible Quizzer, and so far I’ve word-for-word memorised about half of the book of Luke this year which has been great 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Whoops @Kina-Lamb, missed ya there! That’s great; thank you. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@R-J-Wordsmith thanks for being constant with these; they’re so awesome!
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
The little girl smiled shyly up at him. “You can have my pencil if you want mister.” And she held up a sparkly pink object.
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Spring Writing/Reading Goals in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Let me see, my goals for Spring writing.
1 Write ‘The Story of Kit Wraith’
2 Rewrite ‘Sword of Vergonia’ again
3 Edit ‘Candy McKraken’ and ‘The Magician’s Apprentice’
4 Create the Drakhar cultureAs for reading I have Jane Eyre, Rob Roy, Sense and Sensibility, and several other classics on my list.
Senior year is going out with a bang.
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Hello, I’ve seen it. To be honest, at the end I was torn between utter devastation at all the character deaths, or glee at how perfectly they were executed.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Wow, pizza and pancakes. Yum. 😀
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus @Dragon-Snapper @Kate-Flournoy *applauds everyone* Great job all!! *hands out pancakes*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Between sundry interruptions I managed to somehow pound out 526, which I guess is pretty good. Thanks for writing with me guys. 🙂
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Dragon-snapper oh wow! XD Good job! And do enlist me if you ever want it read/critiqued. (Because I want to see this King Daeus and Josiah-frog and ice-cream thing XP)
I got two chapters edited!!! Yay! I’m so happy about that. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Oh yeah, nearly forgot. I wrote 934 words.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree @kate-flournoy @daeus Well, I’m done for tonight. I finished the tale, the rough draft, at least. All that’s left is to edit it.
Nobody give @aratrea a frog! 😛 Actually, Daeus, the frog gave you ice cream in the story. -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy ah nice. XD I get that one too.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Jane-Maree ha! I was not, alas, required as an essential part of the picture… merely to keep part of a background steady. 😛
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