Gracie

@r-j-wordsmith Awesome! The villain finally understood how to do things right here. *applauds*

@daeus Nice count! I copied down 4 pages worth of transitional phrases (because I really should use more of those) and logged all my characters.
@winter-rose @ethryndal @r-j-Anderson @northerner @graciegirl @Audrey-caylin @overcomer @jess @aella I’m still going.

@daeus Nice count! I copied down 4 pages worth of transitional phrases (because I really should use more of those) and logged all my characters.
@winter-rose @ethryndal @r-j-Anderson @northerner @graciegirl @Audrey-caylin @overcomer @jess @aella I’m still going.

@naomijackson Never to late to make goals. This topic has just begun. 😛
BTW, welcome to the forum!

Glad you liked it @emma-flournoy! And thanks for the tips, I almost always miss a few things like that.

@ethryndal, sorry about the milk! Basically this was my story-form rant about proper techniques of villainy.

Thank you both for reading.

@daeus I’m here!

Did you have anything to add on the descriptions, @Daeus?

@Emma-Flournoy YES. I’ve teetered on the edge of Cassian or K2, eventually deciding K2 because just, yeah. (I know, I know, that answer is “vague and unconvincing.” 🙂 ) But Cassian’s next. And YES again! Their relationship was, for me, one of the best parts of Rogue One.

*dramatic music* “I will help you, Jyn Erso…” *dramatic music abruptly…[Read more]

@sierra-r wow, that’s great!!! Half of Luke, that’s a treasure.

During the summer, for the Bible Bee, each category Primary (age 7-10,) Junior (age 11-14) and Senior (age 15-18) memorize about 100 verses and study their discovery journal. At the end of the summer they all take a test and the top 120 to qualify for each category move up to the…[Read more]

@Ethryndal You totally deserve the free advertising.

Cassian. For sure. But Jyn and K2 close behind. (Don’t you love Cassian and K2’s relationship? It’s not specifically shown a ton, but it’s clearly observable and it’s sweet! I ‘specially love that part after they killed all those guys in the square or whatever, and K2 apologized for hitting…[Read more]

@r-j-wordsmith This is the villain I always wished someone would write. IT’S SO HILARIOUS! I was drinking something when I came to the part about the blonde haired hero with a flawless dental job, and literally sprayed my computer with milk because I was laughing so hard. 😀

@Emma-Flournoy Thanks for the free advertising. 😉

Yup, K2 be my fave. I wonder how you guessed? XD Who’s your favorite?

@I-J-Anderson That is incredible.

@Ethryndal *appreciates Galen Erso with you and heartily agrees with everything you said*

And guys, you need to see this picture she drew of Rogue One. It’s amazing.
I don’t think I can link to the picture by itself, so scroll down on the link till you come to it.

Btw @Ethryndal, was K2 your favorite? 😉

@R-J-Wordsmith I LOVE THIS. 😮 All of it! It’s hilarious and riddled with twisted cliches. Only ‘corrective’ things to say—here.

“Your Majesty” I said, panting for breath—there should be a comma after the spoken line

“My loyal subject.” He boomed.—same here—comma, not period

“Arise sir Ootchacha—should ‘sir’ be capitaliz…

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Okay, @Northerner, first of all, we need to talk about the theme and the incredible use of symbolism. At first I thought it was going to be a fairly normal story about an atheist and a Catholic who challenged each other to a duel and it was eventually going to end up one converting the other (no prizes for guessing who. 😉 ) and then with them…[Read more]

@Northerner I have no idea where my first post went. Here. Have it again.

Okay guys.
@Hope gave me a book with three of G.K. Chesterton’s novels in it as an early birthday present, and though I have only read one of them so far it completely blew my mind.
It was The Ball and the Cross.

Has anyone else read it? If so, can we please discuss how…[Read more]