Gracie

@f5a8c3e92 Do not underestimate the power of the INFP…

@f5a8c3e92 I didn’t see that you’d tagged me in this until just now, sorry!

All in all, I really like this excerpt. Generally, it ready pretty well, and flows pretty smoothly, but there are a couple of grammatical issues, although I’m sure someone better at this than I has already pointed them out.

In the prologue, the pacing is a little slow,…[Read more]

@Daeus *dreamily contemplates the infinite*

fyi… I really did write that down…

HA! *curtsies* Excepting the king himself, of course.

@kate-flournoy *blends into shadows* Well, he’ll never find me…

@f5a8c3e92 I’ll critique this as soon as I have enough time to give it a thorough read. It looks interesting. 😀

@f5a8c3e92 *scandalized gasp* FIRST RULE OF SURVIVAL AROUND HERE— ALWAYS—! (No…) NEVER! MOCK! KING! DAEUS!

XD

@that_writer_girl_99 Which they don’t, obviously. *cackles evilly*

@That_Writer_Girl_99 shhhh!! Don’t spill the beans! XD

@hope @kate-flournoy If you know anyone else who will be kind enough to critique, please guide them to this thread.

@hope @everyone If you know anyone else who will be kind enough to critique, please guide them to this thread.

If you know anyone else who will be kind enough to critique, please guide them to this thread.

@f5a8c3e92 Not if the INFPs have anything to say about it… *grins*

@daeus *mockingly pretends to scribble down notes* Hmm… yes. Lily pads. @kate-flournoy Hahahaha. INTJs will rule the world!

@Daeus *grins and writes it down* Okay. Now what?

I COMPLETELY agree with that. More than I can say. Ugh. @kate-flournoy @f5a8c3e92

@f5a8c3e92 yes… you INTJ people are the reason we INFP people have to worry about it so much… XD

@that_writer_girl_99 Sarcasm is my native language (and I’m sure the other INTJs can relate). XD

@that_writer_girl_99 been there, done that. *grins*

Understanding sarcasm will always be a weakness of mine…I’m always too busy thinking about something else, lol. @kate-flournoy Thanks for the heads-up.

@Graciegirl but it’s a paradox! Something so beautiful from something so hideous! It’s a picture of salvation!
(Don’t you dare say anything about frogs. I’m working on a theory that will have them symbolize the evil influences of the world).