Gracie

@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @jane-maree Could you guys tell me if you think it’s a good idea to make Halle part of Maya’s daydream? Please note that they will meet in person at the Academy in a few chapters. Here’s an update on the Prologue:
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blend…[Read more]

@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy Tell me if you guys like the idea of Halle’s prologue being a dream-sequence of Maya’s. She’ll be meeting Maya herself at the Academy, so… I don’t know. Any other opinions are most welcome. Here is an updated version of the prologue:
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her ginger hair…[Read more]

@f5a8c3e92
Okay so I’ve put all my notes and critique points into a google doc (hopefully that works for you). I haven’t finished going through it yet (but I’ll keep going after I post this for you), but as far as I have at the moment I’m quite enjoying it. It had a cool prose style that I’m quite liking. Good job. *thumbs…[Read more]

@christi-eaton *crashes in through ceiling* …Did you say… Slade?!!!

@winter-rose Yeah, the prologue… I’m still trying to incorporate properly into the story. I have just come up with a brilliant idea! What if that sequence with Halle was part of Maya’s daydreaming and she is a character in her story? (However, Halle will be coming in later, as she turns out to be one of Maya’s classmates at the new school she’s…[Read more]

@Christi-Eaton thanks. 😉

I’m here…I have to work on something for school, though… @jess @daeus @jenali @everyone

@f5a8c3e92 I like this.
*switches into professional mode* Your prose is stronger than a lot I’ve seen, and you show a lot of promise with dialogue and characterization. Your sense of flow and pacing does seem to be a bit off— the prologue was too short and vague, for one. It didn’t connect me to the story, which is what a prologue is for. I…[Read more]

@Christi-Eaton *squeals* Still love it!

… can I post mine again here for comparison? It’ll make it look awful but I want to see the similarities. Thanks. 😀
*doesn’t wait for permission*

I can’t do anything right now, but I’ll be on later to plan my WIP some more. @daeus

@Mark-Kamibaya YES. Rogue One. Everyone. Watch it. The more I think about it, the more sure I may be becoming that it’s my favorite movie ever. Seriously. Everything about it was so well done, and the theme—!
*buries face in hands* Just… watch it. You’ll see what I mean.

@mark-kamibaya Yep.

Yes. Angels Take Manhattan and Face the Raven were the only episodes where I *almost* cried.

It’s 10:24 here, and I’m exhausted. Oops.

Signing off…

@f5a8c3e92 @hope

@hope *sniffs* Don’t bring that episode up…

Oh my goodness. That episode…

While watching that, I don’t think I was sad. I was upset that Moffatt would even think to torture me in such a way…

…and then, when it was all over, I cried. A little.

Which one was it that really made me cry…

Angels Take Manhattan, I think? The one where Amy and Rory…you know.

Clara was absolutely brilliant. Amy and Rory were also just perfect together.

Cya ’round! @graciegirl

Yes, Sherlock. @hope

Oh my goodness. I can’t pick one.

For Ten, I really liked Donna.
For Eleven, I loved Amy.
For Twelve…well, Clara was and will always be my favorite companion for Twelve.

Actually, Clara rivals Amy for my favorite companion in general…