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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Oh my goodness, Kate. You’ve given me soooo much to think about and it makes me very, very happy.
Ugh, you’re right. I rely on dialogue and inner expressions way to much. It’s something that I’m trying to fix, and this is the perfect time to start. Use better body language. Got it. I’m not sure why that’s so difficult for me to write…probably…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic It is finished!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 If you can keep your stories a manageable size then good for you. You’ll save yourself so much time and effort. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 good work. Really, you’re off to a great start kicking your story into action. That’s something I had to learn the hard way— how to start a story and keep the pace from the very first sentence. You’re doing great.
The few things I do wanna mention are more ways you could improve the prose itself than for the structure of…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Thank you so much! @christi-eaton
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Good for you! @graciegirl I’m working on an essay right now, but later, when I’m at drama rehearsal, I’ll probably pop in to do some stuff with my WIP.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Thank you both @daeus @kate-flournoy
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 I’ll be praying.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Hello all! This weekend I will be performing in a production put on by my church. I’m rather nervous; the play is about some pretty dark stuff, and I’m not sure how our audiences react.
On top of that, a multitude of accidents and tragedies have plagued members of the cast. Tensions are high. The devil is trying to distract us from the…[Read more] -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Testimonial needed in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I agree with what the others have said, Gracie. Your testimonial was beautiful! @graciegirl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic It is finished!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy @graciegirl Goodness, and here I am marveling at how big 50,000 words seems…
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Snapper replied to the topic Anyone Want to Play Forum Volleyball? in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Dragon Snapper waves to Anne! “Hey! Good to see you again!” Then, in a whisper, she says into her ear, “I’m not a steward either…..I don’t have any social media, but I believe this is just for fun.”
With a cocked head, she addresses @stewie-plotter, “That is allowed right?” -
Ethryndal replied to the topic It is finished!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus YAY! That’s awesome. *throws glitter like confetti*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic It is finished!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus yeah. Probably.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic It is finished!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus ha! Well, that’s good. Adding stuff is fun. You get to go deeper and discover more, instead of having to painfully cut material you already fell in love with and condemn it to the void of unknown-ness forever… *dramatic sigh* One of these days I’m gonna write a first draft that’s only 50,000 words. You wait and see.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Testimonial needed in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@GracieGirl YES. Same here. Identical. I hadn’t thought it out so clearly or beautifully, but yes. 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Anyone Want to Play Forum Volleyball? in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
“@I-j-anderson, Well, of course it means we should decipher it, and go on a long perilous quest.”
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Snapper replied to the topic Anyone Want to Play Forum Volleyball? in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
“I-j-anderson, Well, of course it means we should decipher it, and go on a long perilous quest.”
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I’ll be editing for about 15min or so if anyone else is here.
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