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Can you pop over to my Prison google doc for a bit? @kate-flournoy

@That_Writer_Girl_99 just barely caught me there. 😛 I may have to leave in a few minutes. Can I help you?

@kate-flournoy Are you on?

@northerner I won’t be entering, but if you need help with anything, I might be able to. 😀

@GraceofSpades2017 Oooh I like it! And I usually don’t connect well with stories told by a narrator, so that’s big. 😀
The one criticism I would have is try to keep the tone of the story consistent. For instance, I felt like you were going for the ancient Native American vibe here, but then there were words like ‘okay’ and ‘sure’ and such that…[Read more]

@Northerner ehhhhh… I’d love to help but I honestly wouldn’t trust myself to be unbiased. *horrible apologetic grimace* It wouldn’t be fair to you.

@ethryndal that is seriously an awesome drawing and so realistic! 😀 *high-five*

@Kate-Flournoy that’s great! See you another time. 🙂

@Kate-Flournoy that’s great! See you another time. 🙂

@Kate-Flournoy that’s great! See you another time. 🙂

@Kate-Flournor that’s great! See you another time. 🙂

All right girls, pulling out now. Thanks. I got a fair amount written and broke into a pivotal scene I was nervous about, so I’m happy. 😉

@Ethryndal I thought you would. 😀

@GraceofSpades2017 Eccentric tendencies can make some people even more likeable. *solemn nod*

Yupper dupper, sisters. Of course it’s all right to ask. XD And I’m only a couple inches taller. 😛

Indeed I do. I’m actually an ENFJ/ISFJ mix. 🙂

@That_Writer_Girl_99 try this.